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eu gosto de novels que val para outro mundo tipo esse mas o desenvolvimento falta a energia dos mundos que ele esta pegando para a novel mas e unica e isso fas ele especial,E os mundos de treinamento não acho que seja a melhor escolha e habilidades nem van ser boas comparado a algus manga e novels
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Very confusing for the first few chapters. I've just watched Naruto but I'm not a fan. Many of the names just sound familiar to me but I do not remember them. This makes it painfully difficult to read and understand what is going on.
Really slow development. Starting really confusing. Mc is a bastard with overconfidence. System is useless. Can’t find story interesting. Xxd
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Uma novel que tem mui a oferecer aos seus favoritos e o desenvolvimento é empolgante e te prende a história. Uma novel que tem mui a se apreciar.
I don't know what happened. I'm hooked by the story. Worth to read it. Give it a try. This kind of distructive canon is what i like and what it should be for the term "fan-fic" and in the same time, the story focus on it's MC not the canon MC. I had a good read, so i believe everyone else should too. Have fun.
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It is a well written story and takes a unique approach to fanfictions. But I don't think it is everyone's cup of tea. It's revolves around a darker side of the story with many manipulations by the MC . The MC is a bit dark and you may not think its worth but once started it will get you hooked... You have to read at least 10 chapters to appreciate it. At first the prologue is a bit confusing but believe me once you start reading more it will be worth it.....
Reveal Spoiler It is a well written story and takes a unique approach to fanfictions. But I don't think it is everyone's cup of tea. It's revolves around a darker side of the story with many manipulations by the MC . The MC is a bit dark and you may not think its worth but once started it will get you hooked... You have to read at least 10 chapters to appreciate it. At first the prologue is a bit confusing but believe me once you start reading more it will be worth it.....
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Well writen and has great potential I like how ruthless he is keeping his eye on the prize and not caring how he gets to it I only hope that you update more
why too many naruto fanfics. I'm going to wait until mc is done with naruto at least 10-15 chapter into the crossover to give a proper review, for now because of the cover you get 3 star. (HAVE NOT READ THE FANFIC YET WAITING FOR NARUTO ARC TO BE DONE.)
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This is a very interesting novel it seems to be a attention grabbing and a nonstop must complete all chapters read😳😤😤😤 LOL...I am so going to find myself enjoying my time reading this story that is for sure. 👍😏 Keep the chapters rolling in and we will be reading each and every chapters😎😎😎 Yeppers❗💃💃💃❤♥️♥️🥰🥰🥰
Ohhhhhhhh very very good novel😁😁😁😁😁😁 it seems to be able to grab my attention and interest at the very least!!! 😳😳😳😳😳 Soooooo you must complete all chapters read😳😤😤😤 LOL...I am so going to find myself enjoying my time reading this story that is for sure.😍😍😍 Keep the coming🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
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Typing this ,because webnovel has character count requirement. I haven't read the story yet but in any case I encourage you and your work keep grinding.
This story is dark as f***, not recommended for people who can't take their favorite childhood Naruto and other characters destroyed to pieces and rebuilt as a slave army. Very unique approach and i enjoyed reading it but definitely not recommended for everyone.
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It is a well written story and takes a unique approach to fanfictions. But I don't think it is everyone's cup of tea. It's revolves around a darker side of the story with many manipulations by the MC . The MC is a bit dark and you may not think its worth but once started it will get you hooked... You have to read at least 10 chapters to appreciate it. At first the prologue is a bit confusing but believe me once you start reading more it will be worth it.....
I am just going to give myself five stars. I feel that I am doing good work. I am a working progress, but I feel the story is going well. Coming check out, read some chapters and enjoy. If you don't like, don't spout bull****(rage mode because your favorite character is dead) but give constructive criticism because I am always working to get better.
I had my hopes high after reading intro but the story isnt good...first mc has his world invaded by demons then mc asked for demon bloodline...he has true martial world cultivation techniques so i do know why he has been going through so much hassle in naruto world
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eu gosto de novels que val para outro mundo tipo esse mas o desenvolvimento falta a energia dos mundos que ele esta pegando para a novel mas e unica e isso fas ele especial,E os mundos de treinamento não acho que seja a melhor escolha e habilidades nem van ser boas comparado a algus manga e novels
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Reveal Spoiler Very confusing for the first few chapters. I've just watched Naruto but I'm not a fan. Many of the names just sound familiar to me but I do not remember them. This makes it painfully difficult to read and understand what is going on.
Really slow development. Starting really confusing. Mc is a bastard with overconfidence. System is useless. Can’t find story interesting. Xxd
Reveal Spoiler sempre fico pensando oq escrever nessas críticas :/ . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
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Reveal Spoiler Uma novel que tem mui a oferecer aos seus favoritos e o desenvolvimento é empolgante e te prende a história. Uma novel que tem mui a se apreciar.
I don't know what happened. I'm hooked by the story. Worth to read it. Give it a try. This kind of distructive canon is what i like and what it should be for the term "fan-fic" and in the same time, the story focus on it's MC not the canon MC. I had a good read, so i believe everyone else should too. Have fun.
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It is a well written story and takes a unique approach to fanfictions. But I don't think it is everyone's cup of tea. It's revolves around a darker side of the story with many manipulations by the MC . The MC is a bit dark and you may not think its worth but once started it will get you hooked... You have to read at least 10 chapters to appreciate it. At first the prologue is a bit confusing but believe me once you start reading more it will be worth it.....
Reveal Spoiler It is a well written story and takes a unique approach to fanfictions. But I don't think it is everyone's cup of tea. It's revolves around a darker side of the story with many manipulations by the MC . The MC is a bit dark and you may not think its worth but once started it will get you hooked... You have to read at least 10 chapters to appreciate it. At first the prologue is a bit confusing but believe me once you start reading more it will be worth it.....
Reveal Spoiler Well writen and has great potential I like how ruthless he is keeping his eye on the prize and not caring how he gets to it I only hope that you update more
why too many naruto fanfics. I'm going to wait until mc is done with naruto at least 10-15 chapter into the crossover to give a proper review, for now because of the cover you get 3 star. (HAVE NOT READ THE FANFIC YET WAITING FOR NARUTO ARC TO BE DONE.)
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This is a very interesting novel it seems to be a attention grabbing and a nonstop must complete all chapters read😳😤😤😤 LOL...I am so going to find myself enjoying my time reading this story that is for sure. 👍😏 Keep the chapters rolling in and we will be reading each and every chapters😎😎😎 Yeppers❗💃💃💃❤♥️♥️🥰🥰🥰
Ohhhhhhhh very very good novel😁😁😁😁😁😁 it seems to be able to grab my attention and interest at the very least!!! 😳😳😳😳😳 Soooooo you must complete all chapters read😳😤😤😤 LOL...I am so going to find myself enjoying my time reading this story that is for sure.😍😍😍 Keep the coming🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
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Typing this ,because webnovel has character count requirement. I haven't read the story yet but in any case I encourage you and your work keep grinding.
This story is dark as f***, not recommended for people who can't take their favorite childhood Naruto and other characters destroyed to pieces and rebuilt as a slave army. Very unique approach and i enjoyed reading it but definitely not recommended for everyone.
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It is a well written story and takes a unique approach to fanfictions. But I don't think it is everyone's cup of tea. It's revolves around a darker side of the story with many manipulations by the MC . The MC is a bit dark and you may not think its worth but once started it will get you hooked... You have to read at least 10 chapters to appreciate it. At first the prologue is a bit confusing but believe me once you start reading more it will be worth it.....
I am just going to give myself five stars. I feel that I am doing good work. I am a working progress, but I feel the story is going well. Coming check out, read some chapters and enjoy. If you don't like, don't spout bull****(rage mode because your favorite character is dead) but give constructive criticism because I am always working to get better.
I had my hopes high after reading intro but the story isnt good...first mc has his world invaded by demons then mc asked for demon bloodline...he has true martial world cultivation techniques so i do know why he has been going through so much hassle in naruto world