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Not mine credit belong to Overlord Hater back at fanfiction.net just here to tell you how amazing the story is and support the guy if you want.
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I would like to rate the author's fanfic since it's not mine. Yes he paid me for this. So yeah hope you 'enjoy' this 'wonderful story...........
Why would you even try and draw attention to this story if it isn't even yours? It's hot garbage; names aren't capitalized, there's author's notes dotted throughout the story breaking immersion, the character's don't have much depth to them, and it hasn't been updated in nearly two years. It's a steaming pile of crap. The author notes interrupting the flow of the story isn't even to give good information either; it's often just to give unnecessary information that isn't relevant in any way. One example is Kakarot's eye colour: "He gulped when Kakarot looked straight at him with his glowing yellow eyes(I just mixed red and green together and it came out with yellow eyes when he is a ssj) and flinched when he appeared right in front of him." All in all, this is a prime example of a trash fanfic and the thought that someone else would go out of their way to try and draw attention to it baffles me.