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Our protagonists, le and Tyron, are sixteen average boys developing their VR game about cultivation! One day they finally finished their game and played it, but then they lost their consciousness and waked up in a new world...
(Just read the prologue) l
(Sorry for this lousy synopsis, but I hope you’ll give my novel a try :)
(Spoiler alert!!!!!!!!!!!
They are get trapped as immortals and then they wake up in a other world!) because I didn’t want to confuse anybody
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Btw. English is not my native language so sorry for grammar errors
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I'm not very good at making reviews, but I have to say that your novel is very good to read, I liked the story a lot and I need to say that there are some parts that are very satisfying and that are also very fun to read, the The characters are very funny and I like that and also the way they don't mind showing their powers to the public at the beginning is very good, for sure I will support your novel and I hope you don't drop your novel. I'll be waiting for your chapters and thanks for your hard work.
This book is a really fun read and has a lot of potential for growth. I normally don't do reviews this early but I hope this encourages the author to continue writing and readers to continue or start reading. The Writing quality: His grammar isn't the best but is very readable and even improving and trust me you won't struggle to read and understand what he's trying to portray also the pacing of the chapters sometimes feel a little fast, but most times are steady and you might not have noticed if I didn't mention it. Story Development: I like the way the story is progressing and look forward to future developments as its still ch 16 at the time of this review Character Design: The main characters in this book feel fun and have some depth to them as well as a sensible backstory. Updating Stability: it's 5 stars on that as he's very consistent and doesn't abruptly dissappear without reason. You can know when to expect chapters and be sure to get them. World Background: The world background seems well thought out though u would appreciate an auxiliary chapter with new world and old world cultivation levels as well as another one for locations and stuff Overall this is a lovely book and has a lot of potential give it a try and encourage the author 👍❤️🔥
I'm not very good at reviewing, but here's what I think: 1. the story is very good...for those who like cultivation-isekai-OP type stories I highly recommend reading this. also the story development is quite interesting, starting from making a cultivation game--> then trapped in the world of cultivation (a new world, different from the world of cultivation games made by 2 MCs) the concept is somewhat similar to the story "Overlord", only with a different color. 2. Even though the story is very good, every story/novel must have clarity. why am i saying this??? because the author's story is a story in the form of a cultivation type... then there is such a thing as a "cultivation realm" In the new world, the author tells us that there are 2 types of cultivators, namely sword and martial cultivators. the author says that sword and martial cultivation are the same Sword Cultivator = Martial Cultivator 1. sword-disciple =body tempering 2. sword-master =martial-king 3. sword-grandmaster = martial-emperor ------------------------------ In this line, the clarification of the realm starts to feel strange, if the author checks it again you must be confused too. even when i read chapter 34, the author mentioned that martial dominator is the same as sword supreme. the others also confused me, whether it was a higher martial dominator or a martial sovereign, but in the "instruction chapter" the martial sovereign was not mentioned even though it was mentioned in the early chapters. 4. sword-supreme = martial-ancestor 5. sword-sovereign = martial-dominator 6. sword-monarch = martial-monarch 7. sword-dominator = martial-sovereign ??? -------------------------------------------------- 8. sword-saint = Martial-saint 9. sword-god = martial-god 10. sword-deity = martial-deity (???) before in early chapter is mentioned
are both main characters like at the peak of cultivation? ...................................................................................
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