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In a seemingly utopian future where wars have finally ceased and humanity entered a period of rapid advancement.
the rise of a revolutionary fully immersive virtual reality game threatens to become humanity's second world.
Sylas Sykes a promising young man from the militia in Clover City
Drop everything to dive into this new game and explore this new world
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Interesting story. The plot just made me curious. Although there are a few grammatical errors, I can understand that. I may not be very familiar with story genre games, but this story has made my curiosity recur. Good job, author.
A good novel not my type but it has agood plot also god charter building and a few grammital error over all its ok actually but hope you make more chapters.
I liked your story. The chapters are for my taste to long. But your plot building is very good. I can think of multiple things how the story can continue and yeah let’s see. Your character have a deep and interesting meaning I thin you wrote it good
First of all, welcome to everyone who decides to give a bit of their time to read my story. I'll shamelessly give myself a review to not only give you an idea of what I'm looking for with the novel but also to set a goal for the quality that I want to achieve. I've written (or at least tried) a few short stories before but they all failed as they didn't convince me, I'm very serious with this trying to give them a satisfying plot and development without sacrificing world-building, the first few chapters may be a bit long but it was a necessary evil, from chapter 5 onwards I will try to keep them to 1500 words for easy and fluent reading. Without further ado, I hope you like the story and comment on everything you like and likewise, what you don't, I'm open to constructive criticism.