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Lord of Business

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Synopsis

[Money can't buy happiness, but it sure as hell can buy things that make us happy.
With money not only I grow but my close ones also get benefitted from this]

Money is something which matters in everything, without money you can't get returns nor invent something. Without money there is no growth.

Money is the only thing that can break you or make you.

This is my ideology, but if I had it in my past life, I would have tasted success. But God damn I promise to myself that I am leaving no stone unturned to get rich in this life.

Cause if there is money there is hope, pride, and life, if there isn't we are no better than trash.

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If you found the synopsis interesting pls check out my novel, because I think it won't disappoint. Also, the part of magic will come later though it will be correlated with money.

Don't except the mc to be too evil or too good, he is neutral as his only aims is to earn huge sum of money to give his parents a happy life.

There will be a harem but it will be slow progressing since like I mentioned Mc is only interested in money so it will be a long time before he falls in love with any girl.

Also, mc time traveled to the past. There will be magic, business and criminal activity.

Sidenote: The only two person MC's cares for is his father and mother.

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TSHurley

Okay the story is good but you have writing errors. I'm in school majoring in creative writing and the one thing they taught me was to describe EVERYTHING. Describe what your character is feeling, don't just tell us. We have to feel what he's feeling, experiencing, we have see what he she's. This is a hard task it was hard for me at first too but trust me, try it. You should definitely go back to the beginning and start editing as well. There are some words and sentences that shouldn't be there. Take your time editing.

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Arsenalhole6ty9

so far, this story has thoroughly entertained me, and I can't wait to see where the story goes in the future. Unfortunately, at the time of reviewing this, it has only one chapter.

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LordShivaStories

Review of my own novel. Business and money orientated, there will be magic later in the story which will be related to money but it will be introduced much later. Harem will be there but slow progressing so that it doesn't ruin the story instead enhances. it. Even if he gets a Harem there will be only three things he will care most about money, Father and Mother. Nothing else will be in his mind. So yeah hope you like it

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Scorpious_star

Trust me when I say the story is great a few mistakes in writing here and there but the story in itself is amazing! I enjoyed reading it apart from a few things. Just try explaining more! and everything else will be perfect! <3

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Gaureeey

4.8 solid its a great story ! i love the character and the plot i am to read more I've only read up until 4th chapter, but this is such a pleasant story you set the right tone of suspense since the beginning, WHO DOESNT LOVE A SWEET REVENGE!!! I'm trying not to spoil the story but genuinely wish there was a little more description however its a great start

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Loctovia

It's a promising piece of writing with lots of potential. Story is good so far and will look forward for more. Can't wait to see how the story develops!

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Sinadin_2ndth

A very good novel with a very good writing style. Work has a lot of potential, can't say much as there are only 6 at the moment. But i like it and I hope the author takes this novel seriously!

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redlady

I will like to see how the story unfolds .....the concept is interesting...makes me curious ...the book is in my library . Keep up author !

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UwuCreyo

sooo good like my favorite fried chicken!

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ZenMaverick

I appreciate the author's focus on the protagonist's strong bond with his parents. It adds a touch of warmth and relatability to the story, as readers can easily connect with the desire to provide for and make their loved ones happy. This emotional connection serves as a driving force for the protagonist's ambitions, making the reader root for his success.

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Ninestar619_5803

The story of business and growing I think remains me of the novel 12 hours after. Both this and that, if you read will help you get an idea of how a real business runs. Though this one is still an infant, it will surely rise just like its genre of businesses. Anyway, its writing style and plot are great and good to invest in. Great book keep it up

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HaremKing777

Though it may be early, the story is dark and gripping! After dealing with a lifetime of sadness and misfortune our MC is given a second chance at life. Now he dedicates his new life to becoming as rich as possible in order to give his parents a better life.I look forward to contuing the story as his dark past unravels and we get to see his possible redemption.

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InkDreamer07

Really good work author, the idea of story is very unique and also very good, looking forward what will happen next, upload more chapters soon ❤️

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MelvinDash

The story outline itself was very interesting. will get you hooked instantly at first chapter. The character naming as well was quite unique. would really be interested for coming more updates

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Supreme_V

Dude your story is just amazing I have just read first chapter of your novel and I am feeling connected to your novel may be because of parental love in your story because we Indians really love our parents a lot but your story telling is also amazing this is rare for me to feel connected to a story just after reading some initial chapters so keep it bro .

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Ultimatedaywriter

I like Hinduism mainly because of Asura's wrath, Record of Ragnaroc, and Shin Megami Tensie. A series with a guy legitimately worshipping Shiva is awesome I can't wait for more.

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Cherie_Floret

The storyline theme is unique.Overall the chapters indicate family drama and the time travel . How the protagonist will ready to take revenge the people who wrong him . Waiting for further chapters so we can get the whole picture what was happened in the past.

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Violet_Ivory

This is a review based off of only the first 2 chapters. first off, there isnt much to comment on because of the lack of chapters right now. the grammar is off, there are words missing, use of words that just arent necessary or rather dont really work, but its not so horrendous that its barely legible. I cant really say much about the story, its pretty similar from the get-go to a lot of other things ive read. Although the same points are brought up multiple times. Its good that you included some antagonists who will be playing major roles and i also like the fact that youre including a little bit of your culture in the story.

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alu_sachi

this is good work. Business is essential after all.Author, more chapters please.

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TheWriterOfOrigins

Love the book and the idea behind it. Can't wait for more chapters.

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