Webnovel Author: Ultimatedaywriter - Novel&Fanfic Collection

Ultimatedaywriter

5mth

Replied to Obito_Uchiha_8343

Waking up from a lack of stimili basically.

No words had ever felt so foreboding to my mind that they had only begun restarting. A choice was that I had been lost for so long in the nothing that was eternity that such a concept had slipped my mind long ago. My life had long ago been consumed by the infinite experience of nothingness. Even my name had become nothing more than a distant thread of memory.

The Agency Gamer

Others · Ultimatedaywriter

Ultimatedaywriter

5mth

Replied to Zenithnovels

alright I will try it out.

Angels and Monster Girls

Games · Ultimatedaywriter

Ultimatedaywriter

5mth

Replied to Alias_scaleheart

thank you I really appreciate the review. and don't worry I have no plans for him to lose faith with the angels.

Angels and Monster Girls

Games · Ultimatedaywriter

Ultimatedaywriter

5mth

Replied to Sabaroth_zarkiel

The MC is going to cuck the hell out of some fallen heroes. And Yuri sounds like fun I will plan up some scenes.

Angels and Monster Girls

Games · Ultimatedaywriter

Ultimatedaywriter

7mth

Replied to kalila_dawn

I do have a discord but its kind of dead I can give you a link and I'll start leaving a link for anyone interested.

ch 0 3 CH3: Dragon's Lure

The First Sage

Fantasy · Ultimatedaywriter

Ultimatedaywriter

8mth

Replied to Supreme_V

No that is a metaphor.

I Can Copy Talents Unlimitedly

Eastern · Supreme_V

Ultimatedaywriter

8mth

Posted

I like Hinduism mainly because of Asura's wrath, Record of Ragnaroc, and Shin Megami Tensie. A series with a guy legitimately worshipping Shiva is awesome I can't wait for more.

Lord of Business

Urban · LordShivaStories

Ultimatedaywriter

8mth

Posted

The plot is pretty good and it hits right from the start. The exhusband is an abusive guy with small penis syndrome from what I can tell. The first chapter grips the reader emotionally and keeps them there.

Contract Gone Wrong: My Ex-husband Is My Boss

Urban · Husniya_S

Ultimatedaywriter

8mth

Replied to Supreme_V

While info dumps can be boring you have a lot of ground to cover. I would say try and make an action scene or something with dialogue to use the information instead of firing it out. That doesn't mean you can't drop in information especially if its something the MC knows or has recently learned. As a writer its up to you to decide how much is too much. I'm know to have the opposite problem I don't give enough information leaving readers confused. Its one of those things where you need to be conscious of and practice. I hope I'm making sense man. But seriously a good start to your novel in my opinion.

I Can Copy Talents Unlimitedly

Eastern · Supreme_V

Ultimatedaywriter

8mth

Replied to kenrick_lindo

You know it I think it gave her more character than the MC's mother.

ch 0 2 Rewrite CH2: I Don't Trust Him

Death World Menagerie Nightmare

Fantasy · Ultimatedaywriter

Ultimatedaywriter

8mth

Posted

So far no major grammar errors or anything that took me out of the book. The main character has an interesting system with hard limits which always makes things more interesting. The story has a lot of potential give it a read if you like cultivation novels.

I Can Copy Talents Unlimitedly

Eastern · Supreme_V

Ultimatedaywriter

8mth

Replied to Dark_PersonJJ

That is a possibility but dungeons need to follow certain rules in exchange for their power its in their nature. So while they could become food for Tera the can just as easily become extremely powerful and leave.

ch 0 6 CH6: To Kuoh

The New Future Timeline

Video Games · Ultimatedaywriter

Ultimatedaywriter

8mth

Replied to Dark_PersonJJ

He's sending them over to the cabin in the dungeon.

ch 0 6 CH6: To Kuoh

The New Future Timeline

Video Games · Ultimatedaywriter

Ultimatedaywriter

8mth

Replied to Dark_PersonJJ

well while he isn't top dog in dxd if he was fully trained he would be a continent buster. I would put him mid tier.

ch 0 6 CH6: To Kuoh

The New Future Timeline

Video Games · Ultimatedaywriter

Ultimatedaywriter

10mth

Replied to Daoist_Culture

Yes it is a harem.

Barbarian Hentai Hero

Fantasy · Ultimatedaywriter

Ultimatedaywriter

1yr

Posted

Alright you might not like my review but here it is. I'm not always into slice of life type works but this one is good and has a steady pace. The dialogue and I'm guilty of this too may need to be read aloud by the author in the editing process. Some of the wording is more formal then the context requires but that is my incredibly specific nit pick. As in if I absolutely had to find a flaw this really good work that was it.

The Fantastic Five.

Teen · Prajnya Shriyan

Ultimatedaywriter

1yr

Posted

It has a lot of promise, a great premise, and plenty of heart. I can't see any overt errors which is great. The present tense may be a little hard for some people to get used to but that would be my biggest complaint.

Reborn in Naruto with Karma Seal

Anime & Comics · TranslatorKun

Ultimatedaywriter

1yr

Replied to Axzile

die is the singular form of dice can you english.

He rolled the die.

Multiverse Sect System

Anime & Comics · Ultimatedaywriter

Ultimatedaywriter

1yr

Replied to Lucifer_777

I'm thinking about it.

ch 11 CH11

Multiverse Sect System

Anime & Comics · Ultimatedaywriter

Ultimatedaywriter

1yr

Replied to cabooseiscool_1

Sirzechs has a dragon in his peerage.

As a lazy devil, Rias knew when to take up opportunities when they presented themselves. Dragons were weird and often obsessive. She wanted to add Rias to her horde, but the devil heiress knew how to play that game. She would get the dragon to eat out of her hand and then get the dragon's scaley behind into her peerage.

Multiverse Sect System

Anime & Comics · Ultimatedaywriter

Webnovel Author: Ultimatedaywriter - Novel&Fanfic Collection

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The Agency Gamer

Angels and Monster Girls

Angels and Monster Girls

Angels and Monster Girls

The First Sage

I Can Copy Talents Unlimitedly

Lord of Business

Contract Gone Wrong: My Ex-husband Is My Boss

I Can Copy Talents Unlimitedly

Death World Menagerie Nightmare

I Can Copy Talents Unlimitedly

The New Future Timeline

The New Future Timeline

The New Future Timeline

Barbarian Hentai Hero

The Fantastic Five.

Reborn in Naruto with Karma Seal

Multiverse Sect System

Multiverse Sect System

Multiverse Sect System

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