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This is a story of a wrong man in the wrong place.
Elias Gunn was thrown into the unknown on someone else's whim. Will he be able to find his way in an unfamiliar world filled with dangers and wonder? Will he be able to go safely through countless trials and tribulations? Will he be able to decipher the future from its signs and portents?
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This is my first novel, but I appreciate any constructive criticism.
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REVIEW Narration: Decent and immersive Worldbuilding: Vast and detailed Character development: Nice and steady Character design: Outstanding Dialogues: Realistic and Lifelike Pacing: Not fast nor too slow Writing quality: Magnificent Execution of the Genre: Good pitch Story potential: High Updating Stability: Steady MESSAGE Wow, I am impressed with your work! An amazing piece of art. Hope for more chapters! To anyone who created this, I loved it!
Generally speaking I like system novels but when you add in truck-kun and a disabled MC that gets his body taken over on death by the transported MC.... WELL, you have my attention ๐
This story is big on foreshadowing, and it does it right. You don't know what will happen, but you know it will make sense. This isn't your every day power fantasy. It is a power fantasy with a mystery. Which makes it a good one. Amazing book, keep on writing.
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well well well. The Author is great and good. dear truck-kun makes an appearance here so you know it's gonna be good. storywise it's a concept that's been used and reused multiple times but I'm willing to see how far this one is from the rest. also hey there Gay Wang
great story and system novel always my favorites, hopefully writer can always maintenance consistency the novel update lol [img=update][img=recommend]
Readers would be so hooked with this. Synopsis is great, this could let the readers add the book to their library. Even though this is the first book that the author wrote, the author had great narration , I'm immersed with it. Quite creative of the author for the first chapter title," Transmigration Truck Thursday". Give this a read and support the author, everyone!
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As I like system novel this is a very well made one and there is some nice references here,very well done novel by the author and keep up the good work...
If you're looking for good novel then no need to search anymore because you found it. It's a really good novel, I really love the concept of the novel It's just the wrong guy in the wrong time in the wrong moment just enjoy ๐.