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A young man lives an overworked life which leads to his ultimate demise. He then awakens in a new body underwater with a hologram telling him that he needs to get strong to avenge his race...so much for living an easy after life.
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Write a reviewyou are really good at choosing the best word to describe the feelling of characters and place. but its not enough to give me a light imagination of character face cause you just said the clothes. good work. keep on ^,^
All of these cliff hangers are very suspenseful. Very good read from a couple chapters ago, the twists are insane... interesting! It is easy to read and it doesn't take very long but is still a great read. I recommend this book to everyone even though it is still uncomplete.
This is an above average read compared to most things I found over on Wattpad. Other than that, Caspian felt like a cutout that I can plaster myself into. There isn't much to go for character development around the first five chapters and while the story doesn't feel dry at all with most of the beautiful descriptions and creative creatures, I personally do not think I grew attached with him (the protagonist). That's where most of the negatives end though. The world building and stakes are really nice although some polish may be needed with the essence system (based on the first five chapters). It gave the story the needed conflict for a "game over". Aside from that, have I mentioned the bloody creature designs and the descriptions? They were excellent and while I was sucked out of some scenes, some descriptions still drew me in
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Unbelievable read! Was glued to my seat through the entirety of chapters 1-5 that I have read so far! Would recommend to anyone reading adventure/videogame esc storys. Truly a work of art!
Honestly just a great read! love where this book takes me mentally!!! Brilliant creativeity and well thought out ideas. please keep it coming!!!!!!
Amazing read so far chapters arent too long so its a very easy read to keep up with! I enjoy the vibe/genre that goes with the story💖 Definitely reccomend giving this novel a go! Super talented writing skills and just so proud 😭😭 ️ ️ ️ ️ ️ ️ ️ ️ ️ ️ ️ ️ ️ ️ ️ ️ ️ ️ ️ ️ ️ ️ ️ ️ ️ ️ ️ ️ ️ ️ ️ ️ ️ ️ ️ ️ ️ ️ ️ ️ ️ ️ ️ ️ ️ ️ ️ ️ ️ ️ ️ ️ ️ ️ ️ ️ ️ ️ ️ ️ ️ ️ ️ ️ ️ ️ ️ ️ ️ ️ ️ ️ ️ ️ ️ ️ ️ ️ ️ ️ ️ ️
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I am enjoying this book so far. There was a couple twists which I really enjoyed, it has those unexpected moments. It is very detailed and strange but the good type of strange. Very, very interesting but enjoyable. I cannot wait to read more and also cannot wait to find out what else is going to happen.