Magneto of Hyuga

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TheUrbanKing

Rin is not from the uchiha clan.

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SudoSu

Intresting concept, has huge scope. Worth a read. Hopefully wont be dropped. ................. .................................... .

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SwordGod007

So far, the story is quite good.......... Long chapters, few grammatical mistakes, and cool powers. Hope you will continue to write this fanfic.........

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Josh_Richie

i'm going to state why i don't like this ff. you can read it if you wish to verify.one, rin isn't from the uchiha clan.two, making the entire village know that you have magnet release is just stupid. the hokage, clan, danzo. i mean, why? anyways, i'm gonna put this book on hold in chapter 9. I'll be back to see how it goes. It has great potential of going on Hiatus

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InternetSaint

"With a SYSTEM" story.

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Pillpoppa_13

Been looking for hyuga clan fic nice

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indroid

Stupid MC. With Danzo lurking around, you choose to expose your double bloodline limits in the academy. You don't have enough strength to protect yourself.

Fuh! Although he sounds op, the author balance his progression quite well! I love the story! Give it a try! It’s very good! Ps, uchiha rin is not obito’s rin!!

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hero4hire

I saw alot of people criticizing about student named Rin, Mc showing off to everyone etc... and i dismissed their concern thinking author must have a plan or it was a simple misunderstanding. But NO! while author claim Rin uchiha is different from Rin Nahara, we never see the other one while that uchiha girl is in the same class as obito/kakashi. MC goes on crazy rant about quantum to cosmic theories as soon as he found out he have Electromagnetic powers like he could do all that without theoretical knowleldge or varifying if his power is real EMF or simple kekei gankai like 3rd kazekage. Most of all the story feel very lacking, like a draft of an unfinsihed book with major parts missing. Mc does alot of as_pull without real explaination or logic. We just have to acccept and move on or the story would stop making any sense.

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Topo_15

Grammar isn’t the best but that’s not a problem for me and the only thing i dislike about this story was the main character and his personality.

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Isykik

Its a solid Translationen and the story is also quite good.So read the First 10 chapters or so, to make your own picture of the story. I enjoyed it so far, so give it a try

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Agent_Spider

Best Chinese translation I have read in a while. The story is interesting and there are hardly mistakes in grammar.The text is easily understood but not so much that its's unbearingly casual.The dialogues and stakes are realistic and nothing is forced

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korion

good job keep it up ...................

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Seuszeusz

Good story and the translation is of quality the updates are constant and the plot is good the magnetic powers and its development are magnificent thanks for bringing this great story the mc is not hiding his strength is the best of all Buena historia y la traduccion es de calidad las actualizaciones son constantes y la trama es buena los poderes magneticos y su desarrollo son magnificos gracias por traer esta gran historia el mc no es esconde su fuerza es lo mejor de todo

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carlos_robert

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Gabriel_Tiozon

Can I get the name of original story?___________

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kristian_andres

Me gusta la historia....,............................................................................................................................................................. ............................................

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ErickHenrique_BR

não sei porque a avaliaçao e baixa, mas essa e uma historia boa

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Jordi_Hardiansyah

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Daoist_Dan

It is an interesting fic. If you like the concept of magnetism this fic will satisfy that. Give it a try. _________________________________________