Marvel:New Order

LV 13

WikiLover

This story is a fairly good one that I won’t mind following. The problems it has is in grammar, spelling, and the flow of the story. There are numerous occasions where the POV seems to fluctuate between first and third with the occasional second person story telling. There are also an enormous amount of mistakes when it comes to gender, constantly switching between calling characters he him etc.. only to switch to her. Worth a read for sure but the quality is simply awful to the point some paragraphs will be total nonsense that is impossible to follow.

LV 2

FGOGOD

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LV 4

Ttsfih

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LV 5

SHEOGORATH

I like it, and it is more than enough for you to give it a try. I mean, i have a pretty good taste and this story is more than decent. So stop being a dumbass and go read it, if you like then congratulations, you have a good taste, if not then **** off, i don’t give a **** about what you think ! And this my friends is how you do something nice while acting like a complete asshole. in other words, being a tsundere ;)

LV 4

RaulXD

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LV 12

jhsilver

Chapter 1-16 pretty darn good. I especially liked chapter 16, but chapter 17 was the one that made me drop it. Check out chapter 17 if that doesn't bother you than you should have no problem.

LV 2

Daoist078441

the beginning was good. but the more chapters, the worse it gets. the main character is henpecked and just a sucker. Makes money, built an empire. But lost everything because of some ***** who decided that she is the smartest. I can’t say anything about grammar (anyway saw a lot of complains about it), because I do not know English and use a translator.

LV 5

DarkPhoenix03

The writting sucks, i couldnt understand a single sentence. It appears that the autor doesnt know the difference between he and she

LV 14

Sovereign_of_all

This fic was very enjoyable and i had a lot of hope for it but chapter 17 ruined the novel, it was horrible and the MC takes it like nothing. Dropped for me. .