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i got shot, woke up in marvel, if thats not too much already, am a shield agent but thankfully i had my own advantage in this power filled world... the Werewolf system... time to be a fucking beast!
Ok... I do not own marvel, but my ocs, the cover art is something I found cool and I do not have any claim over it.
I'm a new writer/author and just so you know, I do not tolerate meaningless hate or hateful comments, you like my fic, you don't, that's your choice but do not waste your time typing hateful comments or meaningless reviews, I love when am given constructive criticism, as it helps better my skills as a writer, and I would like to hear your ideas, might or might not add to the story but would love to hear your opinions.
Also don't think just because you don't like what I do with the Mc, you have the authority to tell me you don't like it or I should change it... well it won't work, like I have read some comments on other authors works, that has comments saying they don't like the mcs name or the mcs romance partner and stuff like that, pls don't bring that demanding to this fic, like I said up top, I like criticism and suggestive ideas, not demanding ones
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Well I think it's high time I reviewed my own work, am going to be honest here, am not a good writer so don't expect perfect Grammer use or correct spelling, also there might be days when I won't be able to post, but dear not for I guarantee at least 5 to 7 chps every week, and from what I have heard from my dear readers, the story is going rn, soooo yeah, I always try to flesh out characters that I introduce so there might be times that you think some paragraphs or even a whole chapter is wasted, but it is what it is. I like criticism telling me what I need to improve on or even add and suggestions are welcome, but I won't be accepting demanding suggestions like for example:"I don't like this name change it" Yea no, that ain't working. Anyway for those who want to know, so I don't have to deal with guys like them in the future. There is no harem, so if you can't deal with a no harem fic then kindly leave, but if you are OK with it, then welcome and have a good read. I couldn't add a no harem tag cuz webmovel is on Crack and many of the tags have dissapointly disappeared, so don't come to me if you feel cheated. I have a little idea of how I want the fic to go so don't worry about making random stuff happen for no reason. And I will try to finish, ik alot of authors say this only to drop but I'll try ma best to not get burned out, also I'll probably end the fic at infinity war or maybe if am feeling special, I could further the storyline. Well that's it, I don't blame you if you skipped most of what I just typed, I also skip most of em when authors do this...
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dialog is terrible and feels rushed/fake. the mc is meh, not a total idiot but borderline and the missions are stupidly easy and offer way to much reward and the system does nothing but offers quests to unlock his bloodline. if you want a toilet read it's OK, just scroll till you see a bit of fighting and skip the dialog for sure and wth is up with using the term gunslinger .. and pew pew sound effects , just leave that out.
there are many original characters in this work. and she is very very very very stretched and boring. no interesting events (except a meeting with the professor, everything else is deadly boredom). I don't recommend it.
Please for all that is Sacred don't drop this if you can avoid that. Been out here looking for a decent werewolf fic and never get any good stuff or they're incomplete. The start of this is already quite decent and you haven't even veered into the mcu plot. ๐คฃ๐คฃ๐คฃ๐คฃ๐คฃ I'm on my knees begging. Don't drop it. YOU CAN DO THIS
The grammar is really bad with spelling mistakes in almost every sentence. Very quick chapter updates (4 chapters a week). Story is alright but a bit slow. Characters are very bland with little to no personality. World background is literally just Marvel.
Rushed, artificial/forced, painful to read, also authors synop is cringe..wfefscsvdgdgdvdbfhfhdhdnfjrhfjtmyny4h5h5hthtbtntbtbfnrhtbrnrbrbfhrhfhfhfnfhfbfnfbfn
Great so far, reviewing from chapter 8, this is everything I have been looking for, everything is looking OK right now, the only thing that needs improvement is the writing quality, besides that, this is quite good, I very much recommend.
So no yeah.... it got dropped... hard, like an anvil onto a watermelon level of dropped
Good but got discontinued, wish it hadnt though. The plot was good and mc was fun. Wished the author would of at least told us what his final form and heritage was.
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whos Theo romantic relationship with??????????? Natasha Romanoff? Maria Hill? Wanda Maximoff? not a fan of hers but just guessing.........................
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I love the setup of the story, it has everything i need werewolf, system, and your already in SHEILD, i hope you continue uploading so that i can support you, and pls dont drop halfway