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My try at getting back to writing, just for fun now, updates would be when I am in mood of writing, please do enjoy.
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Gray was a normal 16 yr old who got trucked out of existence, met an ROB, got some powers and reincarnated I'm My Hero Academy world.
AU MHA world.
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Look I kinda opted out after like I think chap 5 was it, I thought it was a bit stupid how things were explained because as an outsider looking in, the 'story' from his childhood to U.A was kinda eh and his 'training' n' overall head space as an MC wasn't really compellingly or even remotely written competently enough to make the flow when reading somewhat exciting I mean it's a -clichè to competent hero- type story so why am I just stuck reading bars of chalky text about powers that won't be relevant unless the fight scenes are spectacular? We're introduced to zero of the fascinating ways things can play out after reincarnating or basically any comedic or interesting uses of his abilities that he can find on his own, what I got was just skipping training because "being a kid is cool and relaxing!" :c it really disappointed me, even with the throw in of him actually bothering to spend his time learning subjects he had an interest in, in his previous life he just feels like... well a dumbass. I removed the story from my Library and then reading list but the app still finds a need to notify me of updates, so periodically I'd read chaps after stuff I really enjoy like -Custom Made Demon King-, -The Oracle Paths-, -Supreme Magus- or -Reverend Insanity- when they don't update and the the Authors who make really cool fan-fics get discouraged when writing or just don't have the time n' reduce their steady paced publishing to meager novel update chaps once every two weeks.... Point is between work and sleep I've gotten up to chap 14 of this 'novel' and I don't really get why there are so many people bullying people making honest reviews or comments on chapters. Like dead ass I love his powers but what the author is doing to the characters that I know, and the world that I love, it just makes me kinda cringe. This isn't a bash review I honest to god don't understand what anyone is protecting, literally gave Izuku a quirk but still made him shy, calmed Bakugou down, put tetsu tetsu of all people in class 1-A, then fuxked the school schedule so that there's no possible way the incident with the school gate and the stealing of 1-A's schedule can happen when the kids are in the cafeteria >w< and he had the f***ing nerve to imply that 'asking' an eagle or whatever type of bird to fly with a ball in its claws or beak for however long can = infinity even though them mofo's need to eat and have kids it's also bs that he tried using a measurement of AFO's strength enhancement to get the MC's pitching score an infinity, there's so much more sh*it to talk about but that would be either after or before chap 10 within chaps I don't even remember the numbers of(since there's no f***ing chap titles) and I'm just not in the mood to get on a little fan boy's radar. Last thing I'll say is stop defending something when you can't even completely articulate the issues that it possesses, and don't waste spider sense.
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Story was okay but almsot every chapter was just explaining his abilities but also forgetting about his spidey sense... but what made me drop a star an a half is just the fact that the author gives Deku a pyrokinesis quirk before him getting OFA kinda ruined the story so yeah. Rating may change but idk
This is great keep doing this work and please don't abondon it I will support you[img=recommend]
Another self fulfillment bs, mc has spiderman, symbiote and haku, masters spiderman and learn to use haki and the symbiote quite young , is a genius, in short? everything the authorbelieves himself not to be.
The story starts off fine but quickly takes a turn down hill. Parts of the writing dont make sense and useless details are added for no reason. Every time there is a timeskip the mc grows for some reason, it has no importance but just happens. Another issue I had was hoe the mc is provlaimed to be smart but only looks at the heros outside of japan at the age of 14. Thats pretty narrowminded for a supposedly smart person. Anyway thats my thoughts on the matter.
I know I are trying to explain the Mc powers but try to focus a little more on the story or interactions like maybe do an interaction with the matron, maybe make him somehow meet one of the people from the main cast But all in all it is very good but has potential to be better
You might be thinking not bad but this is not what you think. Yhe mc is one of those i don’t want attention type of person and the powers are weird
Very good, but I believe that there are now some new villains to give more emotion, something like a partner for the shigaraki that is a challenge for the MC. momo for example would be interesting, as giving a training direction for her to make an armor like Tony's training together with the mechanic of the construction site would be really cool. other than that I think it's perfect, never stop thanks for the story.
can have some changes here and there, has potential to be a great story, is enjoyable, story has a nice pace to it, not too fast not too slow either, though needs some more character interactions, powers that MC have a very good for that would, and it's good that it's an AU world, OC world would have been very boring honestly until it's a slice of life genre
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5 5 5 5 5 5 hope tbis novel stay as long as possible. 5 5 5 5 5 5 hope tbis novel stay as long as possible.
writing and update: good character design: I am confused whether to appreciate new one who only explained in single paragraph or old one. story: training and training then training and more training. Hardly any dialogue between him and classmates. I am sorry, I am more of a story guy than ''getting stronger and stronger" guy.
The MC's personality is spelled out quite well, he is not too fanatical and does not seek to save the whole world, but at the same time he is not a "dark" character, I would say that his personality tends more towards the light side than towards neutrality. The main character is quite smart, but does not possess some kind of extraordinary cunning, he strives for strength but does not forget to get pleasure from life. So far, that's all I can say about MC, as he barely interacted with other people. The writing quality is excellent (as far as I can tell from my poor knowledge of English), the word count in the chapter is also good, the refresh rate is not very stable but pretty good. The author did a great job adding original details that made the MHA world much more detailed and logical. As far as I can tell, the author is pretty good at inscribing of the original characters, but the canon characters are not quite like themselves, at least Nezu, although in the future when the author starts writing more interactions between characters, their characters will be more like their original selves. P.S. While this is all I can say about this fanfiction, when more chapters are released I will try to finalize my review. But I would also like to add on my own that I find this fanfiction fantastic and I would love to read the chapters that follow.
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Author please don't cut off my supply and drop this novel. I love how the mc interacts with his family, and how his powers are progressing. Story development is 10/10 so far in my opinion. I don't usually comment on these things, but I'm genuinely enjoying your story.
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please continue this novel author. I loved all the chapters so far. 👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼
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This book is great. The concept is interesting and the grammatical mistakes are kept to a minimum. Plus the set of powers he has are really cool. I have a suggestion though. How about having the MC register a second quirk named ''Symbiote" to avoid awkward questions like ' what is that big gooey thing on your body?'.