Mission: Impossible - Uprising

LV 2

MEWCHAN19

The characters seem to have distinct personalities and roles within the story. However, it might be helpful to provide more background or context about each character to help readers connect with them better. The dialogue is realistic and fits the tense situation the characters are in. It might be beneficial to break up the dialogue with more descriptive language or actions to give readers a better sense of the scene.The plot seems intriguing, with the characters dealing with the aftermath of a battle

LV 15

slowestcook

A fanfic worth checking out if you’re a fan of M:I and the Romero-verse, although admittedly, I only know M:I. Review as of Chapter 4, which is the most current chapter. I think Ethan Hunt was captured well in the beginning, but I personally felt more of a Jack Reacher vibe. Regardless, I liked that aspect. His dialogue is usually pretty interesting. I don’t feel any chemistry between the other characters (be it trust, cohesion, when there’s flirting) and they feel flat to me. Maybe if I knew the other show, I’d have a pre-existing idea of their personalities. Writing has very few spelling or grammar errors, and the few there are don’t distract from the reading. Bravo on that! However, the writing is very wordy for some scenes and not others. It can feel a little sterile and lack emotion. Execution of some ideas could have more payoff, like some action scenes could be fleshed out and made more interesting by building the tension or getting creative in the fight instead of just saying everything gets shot or run over. I don’t feel as much if a threat from the ghouls/zombies as I do the other people. If that’s intentional, then well played. It does feel like a missed opportunity—and maybe you’ll cash that in later. Overall, interesting and worth checking out if you’re a fan! From the Creator’s Thoughts, the author seems like a fan that wants to do the source material justice. It’s still in the early stages, so I think it has potential as it continues.

LV 4

Allevatore_dicapre

The style of writing Is well done , the pace of the story Is nice , even though I am not a Mission impossible fan I Will give this novel a chance

LV 3

LanumKing

this was a well written and well planned novel. the pacing was good the scene were explained and designed excellently. I personally think that Ethan's character is a bit generic which i aint to find of but it's find hopefully this show follows the kill off a character dynamic and does depend on dead wait to hold it back.

LV 11

Visionary_M

Amazing! I enjoyed reading this. Passages are well written with a striking balance of description and dialogue. Writing is clear and precise, little to no grammatical errors, and good pacing. However, paragraphs are pretty long it would be good to divide some of the paragraphs to make texts easier to read. Overall, great job, looking forward to next updates. Keep up the good work. [img=update]