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I deleted this and I'm not going to write anymore so if anyone likes this then write your own story.
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Too rushed, although I can concur that he has become less Op and there are more characters in this retake. However the second chapter is basically a Hi then bye situration with not enough diologue or discriptions, the discriptions should continue for at least 1 more chapter then a mini traning arc followed by them leaving instead of this plan like 2ed chapter, although I like the first chapter a bit more than the previous Ps. Will rewrite this
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By the way people are asking why not a dragon,griffon or a phoenix and I will be doing super op. Creatures like that. The wolf will evolve into fenrir the hawk will evolve into a phoenix I just needed a base so I can build him up.
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