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After her family was brutally murdered, eighteen-year-old Jennifer Black moved to Lake of the Ozarks, Missouri to start a new life, but without any family or friends she has no one to talk to about the visions she has had every night since her parents died. So, when eighteen-year-old Samantha Jones comes to Jennifer in her dreams, asking for help and giving her the name of a detective who can solve her kidnapping, she jumps at the chance to get answers. That is when she meets Detective Marcus Azzini. Marcus is gorgeous, older, and harboring a dangerous secret. Jennifer ends up working with Marcus to find Samantha and eight other girls also missing from Lake of the Ozarks. When the kidnapper turns his sights on Jennifer sparks starts to fly with Marcus and everything gets complicated. Now Jennifer has to figure out what the kidnapper is really after, what it has to do with her parents' murder, and how her blood figures into it.
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This novel is captivating and compelling right off the gate. First person perspective is nicely done. Story flows well and the characters are very likeable so far. Lots of chapters right away. Keep it up, great work.
Pretty good book so far. A little disappointed with the writing quality, but the overall story and plot are really good. The way the author writes up the suspense and how it makes you continue reading is really good. A good read.
I'm new to this genre, so this may differ a lot from other reviews. The story at times feels rushed, there are some grammatical errors here and there, but those are not the main problems I've found in this story. The relationship between the main characters develops way too fast; some interactions feel unnatural, and sometimes they don't feel consistent. The first chapter was probably the best out of the first five. The story has some potential, and with some minor fixes, the story could reach new heights.
Always a fan of mystery novels. My expectations were very low when I started reading this novel as I was expecting some overdone romance plot but I'm seriously glad that it wasn't like that and instead actually had some substance. I think the novel is readable, I believe others said that the writing quality was lacking but I am not sure if it is because I am tired as of now but I can't seem to find all that many. Only con would be the amount of words per chapter which is a bit much. Looking at the length of each chapter I would estimate about 1500+ words per chapter which is okay for the first chapter in my opinion but other novels tend to have shorter ones after their first chapter but I could be wrong. Nonetheless, I would recommend this novel to anyone who is into this genre.