yeah so I found this novel when I was searching for a leviathan mc ( I like leviathans ok ) ok straight to the point, dude honestly this has potential but I think you need to flesh out the story some more and you need to write in a proper format with punctuation, like seriously what you wrote needs improvement it feels hollow
yeah so I found this novel when I was searching for a leviathan mc ( I like leviathans ok ) ok straight to the point, dude honestly this has potential but I think you need to flesh out the story some more and you need to write in a proper format with punctuation, like seriously what you wrote needs improvement it feels hollow