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Kitazawa’s grades at the Ninja Academy had always been mediocre.
Uchiha Itachi graduated at seven; he barely scraped through at thirteen.
Uzumaki Naruto became the savior of the ninja world at seventeen; at that same age, Kitazawa was still struggling to make Chunin.
In this harsh world of shinobi, Kitazawa was what people called a fodder ninja: no talent, no bloodline, and no backing.
To stay alive until the story’s grand finale, he’d chosen the safest path—teaching at the Ninja Academy, a job he’d held for five years.
“Another peaceful day in Konoha.”
Kitazawa rose from his seat and walked to the window.
It was enrollment day again, and the training grounds were buzzing with life.
He glanced down at the stack of new student files in his hands. Names leapt out at him, all too familiar:
Uzumaki Naruto, Uchiha Sasuke, Hyuga Hinata, Ino Yamanaka, Sakura Haruno, Akimichi Choji, Nara Shikamaru, Inuzuka Kiba… and more.
'DING'
'Host has reached age six and successfully enrolled in the Ninja Academy.'
'Activating the Strongest Shinobi System.'
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Write a reviewEstá espectacular, el ritmo es un poco frustrantemente lento pero como empieza al mismo tiempo que el canon de la serie se entiende, o sea no vas a tener 200 capítulos de crecimiento en la segunda o tercera guerra ninja como la mayoría de los fanfics que se suelen ver, sin embargo espero que esto no se aplique a los 5 años de estudio de Naruto porque no creo que aguante más de un año extra,
The story starts off strong, and the premise of being isekai’d into the role of an instructor at Naruto’s academy is genuinely enjoyable. Seeing the main cast from this different angle is a refreshing twist on familiar material. The update schedule is impressive, and the writing consistency deserves real credit. The author clearly puts effort into both pacing and detail. The story also does a good job of showing the main character steadily gaining new techniques while teaching his students — the early progression is fun to follow and feels rewarding. However, around the 150-chapter mark, things start to stagnate. The story falls into a predictable rhythm: he trains, he instructs, he pats Hinata on the head, flirts with his girlfriend, and impresses the Hokage to earn new jutsu. It’s the same loop over and over again, with very little forward movement. The students are still young, and though they could probably graduate soon, it feels like the main character is set to remain at the academy for several more months — maybe even years — until he effectively becomes a god-tier figure in the Naruto world. World-building is also quite narrow. Beyond a few side missions, everything takes place within the bounds of what we already know from canon. There’s little exploration of the larger shinobi world or original content, which makes things feel somewhat confined. As for character development, the main character is always improving, but not in a way that carries much depth. It’s a lot of movement without much substance — like an arm flailing without muscle behind it. Overall, it’s a good story with a solid foundation and impressive effort, but it’s definitely starting to peter out as it goes on.
Really solid story, very interesting character development. The grammar and overall readability is solid. My only complaint and the reason I've stopped reading is the weird foot fetish thing that pops up every now and then, it's very weird and really breaks the rhythm of the story.
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An actually well translated Chinese fanfic that doesn't often dip it's toes into the most common stereotypes from other Chinese authors? Sign me up! Love the work so far
It's an interesting story so far. I just happened upon it after being posted for an hour lol. The premise and plot seem pretty fresh. I'm a big fan of system novels. Keep up the good work.
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Até o capítulo 239, não encontrei nada realmente problemático a ponto de afetar a história. Mas, na minha visão, o relacionamento com a Kurenai é completamente desnecessário. Ela não agrega nada além do papel de “namorada do protagonista”, e ainda participa de várias missões nas quais, pelo nível de força dela, simplesmente não deveria estar. Isso me soa como um deslize de coerência da história — independente da força absurda do MC. Também sinto falta de batalhas verdadeiramente de alto nível e do devido reconhecimento da força do protagonista. Ele literalmente derrotou com facilidade um dos 7 Espadachins da Névoa, e logo depois a Kurenai pergunta se ele está no mesmo nível do Kakashi. Como assim???!!!! A partir desse ponto, o MC já ultrapassou o patamar de um jōnin de elite, entrando claramente no território dos Kages, mas ainda se comporta como se estivesse no mesmo nível do Kakashi. Isso quebra um pouco a consistência da progressão. Quanto ao desenvolvimento dos alunos, está bem construído — não tenho grandes críticas. Porém, um detalhe me incomodou: logo no início da história, o Sasuke já utiliza vários ninjutsus, e considerando que ele ainda está no primeiro ano, não acho que ele teria chakra suficiente para isso. De todo modo, fico aliviado que o massacre Uchiha possivelmente não vá acontecer, o que abre espaço para um rumo bem mais interessante para a novel.
Reveal SpoilerIt's the story of a guy who transmigrated without a system or cheat so he takes up teaching to live through the coming events. His system kicks in when he starts teaching Naruto's class. From there he gets stronger as he also trains the future Konoha 12 to be much stronger than their cannon selves. As of writing I'm on chapter 82 and I can safely say the future events will definitely change but it may take a while to get there because we have to get through the academy first. However it's not boring as long as you enjoy good character writing.
its really good story, the interaction, how MC make other characters develop, its amazing works
I’m loving this story. Is slow paced as they are still on the first year of academy but I can’t wait until MC shows his true powers and the start of cannon
a good story, despite some of its issues. the MC lives up to being a good teacher, with some Biases but still does his best to teach the students. only issue is all the students are damn near Jonin in power while being in there first year...and still got a few more years to go until graduation. needs to start picking up the pace soon. otherwise, would recommend it to those with patience. (more then me.)
Reveal SpoilerMuy Bueno. Muy Entretenido Y Se Lee Muy Facilmente. En Resumen. Un 10 Solido. No Estoy Seguro Si Es Una Traduccion China O Si Es Escrito Por Ti Pero De Todas Formas. Esta Muy Bien Hecho.
I'm up to chapter 50 and I've got to say I love this concept. I can't wait for continued release;!
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it's a good story, especially the character's personality and the way the story unfolds. Even though there's a player system, it doesn't ruin the story but rather adds to it.