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Synopsis
Leiyin accidentally crossed into the One Piece World, and accidentally obtained the Naruto System.
Chakra, Ninjutsu, Shinobi Tools, Kekkei Genkai, Sage Mode…
Fire Release vs Ace; Water Release vs Crocodile; Shinra Tensei vs Nikyu Nikyu no Mi; Amaterasu vs Magu Magu no Mi; Susanoo vs Kaido…
This was the adventure of a person, who gradually on the road to the top of being the strongest…
~Btw Im a translator for this novel~~
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did the translator change after chapter 43? it changed from really good to just slightly better than machine code, wtf happened? .............................
not sure what happend after chap 40 but the mc seems to be interested in young girls, especially lolis and logic is all over the place. he wants to be the freest man alive then joins the marines.
great story, the translation are fantastic till bout chapter 48, then it becomes a wuxia level google translation.............................
Chinese classic wuxia sshit mixed with OP never seen someone destroy OP so hard ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
Una mierda, mc inútil , sistema inútil,autor una mierda, si estaba en el barco a la noche, porque no robaba todo el dinero que los piratas tenían en el barco y se compraba algo? Una mierda
This is stolen from SystemTranslation, that is why from chapter 44 it goes off the rails. If you want to read the real translation from chapter 44 onwards go to systemtranslations page, its on their p.a.t.r.e.o.n.
Not good for me! Not good for me! Not good for me! Not good for me! Not good for me! Not good for me! Not good for me! Not good for me! Not good for me!
The mc is an idiot he accept a fight with garp even though he know that garp is one of the strongest character in one piece wow the author sucks
The story is pretty decent with some minor chinese cultivation vibes in terms mannerisms of characters (arrogant idiots asking for faceslaps). It was still enjoyable to read and has a pretty good mc, good fight scenes, good pacing, etc. BUT from chapter 44 you can throw all the praise I just gave out the window because it became absolutely terrible. The translator changed and not in a good way. Where before it was edited to fit the One Piece/Naruto vibe it now became written like a chinese cultivation story. Also the translation from chapter 44 and onwards is literally garbage. The translator seemed to have changed from a human to a machine that just translates with no regard for if it makes sense whats written or not. Sentences structured wrongly making it impossible to read, words that make no sense randomly added, names/titles of people wrong (example: before ch44 there was a mention of [Black Cage]Hina, at ch44 it became [Black Threshhold] Hina). I skimmed through the next chapters, then skipped ahead in the story a couple of times and it seems the translation stays garbage. Pretty disappointing if Im honest. TL;DR Its a good story untill chapter44. If you want to waste some time, go ahead and read it. Its enjoyable enough. Its not like we arent used to fanfics that get dropped with no warning, so having to stop because translations at ch44 isnt that bad...
A really good idea and story the English is very rough however that shouldn't take away from the idea nor the charcters that were developed with lots of thought and care if the story was a bit slower and the English better it would be 5 stars
good novel but put the correct tags if it's going to be a romance novel and harem put it because I thought it was going to be a novel focused on history and adventures, fights and such, now the whole focus is on the protagonist's romance with the navy girls and if it wasn't enough, he put the other one of the first caps to increase the harem even more, but it's a good novel for those who liked this type
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its not a one piece fan fiction its a chinese fan fiction of an alternate chinese one piece AU people are reacting like strereotype of chinese cultivation novel its trash .