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This is my first time writing. so yeah please give any suggestion you want.
and yeah mc will be an evil protagonist.
comment below and give feed bake.
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And with the 2nd review from No_Name_diety himself, He's presence shall forever be immortalized in the synopsis of my novel.
question of the first reviewer
(Smh, why can't other authors glorify their 1st reviewer. Not like that other piece of shit.
This Old Ancestor here gave you my presence and you dare not respond. Your insolence shall be the downfall of your mortal. 收起 )
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Horrendous Writing but its fair its his first time writing a novel. Many misspelling errors, bad grammar, and etc. Also world background, its naruto what can you expect. But its good that it's evil mc (I Hope). Short Chapters as of Ch 2. But I hope that you become a better writer to feed my ever growing boredom.
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Hum its just first chp so I can say anything yet . but hop just it will be with evil mc........................,............................