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This book was amazing I hope u make more! Ihhiuhvhhuhfiurhwuhrghgwhihigurhiwhgiurhoijgqoiejoijeoqhujqiejoiebcqoibfoeqoifbeqibfojbqeojjfbjoeqbfeojqbijfqbijebifjjeqofbqei)nfiqjebfijeqbdobjedfeq
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I think this guy was trying to write the anime I just finished watching but really, I am disappointed. It actually started very casually. Even I can rewrite that story more consistently.
The first chapter was good, but, it needs some work, and you spelled jinchuuriki wrong. Your grammar is an example when trying to set the mood, please keep your tone consistent. Sorry, if my advice was a little bit sucky, but, your story great, it just needs a little work.