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I've been struggling to nail down the perfect synopsis, and I have to admit, it's been a bit frustrating. But they say practice makes perfect, right? So, before we jump into the story, let's have a little chat about Yūhabahha, or as we'll simply call him, Yhwach.
Yhwach is the final villain of the Bleach manga and is the father of the Quincy and the Soul King's son, his demise due to a deus ex machina felt like a disappointing end to such an important character. It reminded me of how Kishimoto dealt with Madara Uchiha, and I understand Kubo's health issues played a role in that.
But what if I told you that Yhwach's story isn't over? Instead, he's been granted a second chance at life by none other than the Soul King.
Some may dismiss this as just another cliché multiverse story where Yhwach goes on a rampage, defeats the main villains of each verse, and collects girls along the way. But let me stop you right there— First of all, no, and second of all, absolutely not.
Think about it. How many multiverse stories have you read that actually have a well-paced plot? Not many, I bet. well, But this story? It's different. It's got a plot that'll keep you hooked from start to finish. If you stick around and join me on this journey until the end, you'll undoubtedly realize that this is one of the best stories you've ever read.
For those who might not be up to speed, let me break down what a multiverse is. definition of the multiverse. a hypothetical space or realm consisting of a number of universes, of which our own universe is only one.
And the folks who wander through these multiverses? Well, they're called Multiverse Walkers...
This book will show what Yhwach could have accomplished if he had been given a second chance at life.
But it's not just about him...
(Please read the bio it contains a lot more info and the story is way better than my synopsis)
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Reader Disclaimer :
Please note that the biography provided here is outdated and only reflects Yhwach's old stats at the end of The Thousand-Year Blood War arc.
Additionally, the bio introduces two other main characters to the story. If you're curious about romance, I'll be clear: there's no romance or harem involved.
Admittedly, the beginning of the story isn't the strongest. Yhwach's personality feels off, and I acknowledge that. This message might stay here until I rewrite the entire first season and address other scenes that feel out of place. Some readers might find certain aspects frustrating, like Yhwach's passivity in certain situations.
...in the first place, I wasn't really writing seriously. Like, you can tell by the quality of the first few chapters. It's also too late to change it now
Consider this a heads-up for future readers. I wouldn't want you to invest time in something you might not enjoy. It's a way to save your time.
Also, if you're planning on leaving a low rating. Please don't just put emojis on it and leave. If so I will delete them. And please provide constructive feedback so that I and future readers can understand the flaws of this Fanfiction.
( I know I've removed some earlier reader reviews, and I want to explain why. Back then, the beginning of the story was honestly pretty rough, and those reviews mostly criticized those initial chapters. )
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First World: TellTale's The Walking Dead ( Completed )
2nd World: Akame Ga Kill ( Completed )
3rd World: High School DxD ( Completed )
4th World: Fate/Yhwach? No, it's Fate/Zaegar ( Completed)
5th World: Rwby ( Completed )
6th World: Jujutsu Kaisen ( Completed )
7th World: One Piece ( Ongoing )
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I generally don't post reviews but as the author wanted me to give feedback so here we go:Grammer: Writing wise so far I have not noticed any grammatical errors and author does highlight which character is speaking which is good.Chapter: chapters are long and that is what I appreciate, yes some chapters feel like they are going for too long with just talking but I enjoy them as I do not enjoy having short chapters and being left in suspense for weeks to months.Characters: as noted above, though there is some reduction in points in both story and character as there are some moments that feel like there is a redundancy or repitition in dialogue.Update stability: keep it in your library for a week and you will see how many times you will be pinged daily.world background: For the author's first book he is very good at developing the world and giving visual to the scenery.overall: It is an enjoyable piece of story just that you might feel like you are reasing shakespeare sometimes due to the way the dialogues are going but when it is fun to see the little twists and turns that befall TWD cast when bleach is introduced into the world.
this fanfic is so immersive I'm impressed with it this is worth you time I guarantee
5 star for the Yamamoto Bankai and for making the Dxd fanfic become better then the original where every single other Dxd fanfiction is the same following the plot where this author makes an even better Plot not only that but is close to finishing Dxd where every other fanfic related to it just keeps going or is bad and is the same few things I'd like to share is the fact that there is no romance between other characters and ywach which is absolutely great since I was worrying when I saw the 3rd world and almost lost hope in the fanfic when the author reassured me that there isn't romance or a harem and even put it in the synopsis the fact that the author interacts and talks with the readers and gives them the choice to decide the next steps for the following chapters is awesome the only thing i dislike is the fact the Author blue balled us at the latest chapter which is i think Zargar the hollow's return Ophis's abduction and great red's death overall the start of the fanfiction isn't the best thats obvious but the author learns from his mistake and continues to write better and more interesting stuff i recommend you read the entire fanfiction its worth your time no doubt about it and once you learn more and read more about the story you'll be hooked like everyone else and would like to support the author if you want my recommendation on where to start read Chapter *Winds of Change* continue from there
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You have reflected the character very well in this fanfic of Yhwach which makes you feel the most real I have ever read, thank you for your effort. It's the best fanfic I've read at telling the story through the pov of two or more people. [img=recommend] [img=recommend][img=recommend]
mega w author he makes sense and wrote all detalics, i love that fanfic, i love themes about bleach, im making a trash word for 140 words, cuz i cant post it while i have <140 words gl tho!
Been waiting ages for a tale like this, and let me tell you, it’s worth every second! The story is like a rollercoaster that never lets up, and the characters? They’re as real as they come. Each chapter leaves me yearning for more, A must read for anyone who craves a story that digs deep. Five stars, no doubt. -William Afton
Writing’s very good, almost too good! 5 stars, great job! And I also think that the stability is very nice, as this man updates every 20 years! Only 20 years! 5 stars for that! But..the story development is lacking, where the emotion feels very forced and just way too weird, like how the characters don’t question how this random guy says he’s been given a second chance but not get crucified. 3 stars, do better. The character design, however, is very nice and accurate! 5 stars, continuing the streak! And the world background is also amazing. 5 stars! 4.6 overall.
One of the very few fan fics here where effort can be felt when reading it. It starts out slow with the walking dead arc and but it is totally worth it once things start to scale up. The authors take on Yhwach and there own additions have been original and up to a quality that few other fan fics have been able to come close to. I have never been one to write a review as it was always a bit out of the way but this is the one which has broken that line of thought. I insist you at least try it.
Great story only problem is how the characters talk, it feels like a Wattpad story which isn't bad but could be better. anyways great in every other aspect.
reed up to chapter 76 and I gotta say the dxd arc really killed the story for me all the character development from the first 2 worlds go down the drain and like Yhwach got factory reset to himself during the beginning of the blood war arc only made it that far because i hoped he'd get back
This is not Yahweh, the character, strength, desire and goals are completely different. It’s as if a weak-willed person is walking around other worlds and doing nothing. Zegar is more interesting as a protagonist. (Google translator)
first time writing on webnovel so yes i'll give myself a 5 star review because yhwach said so and you know what happens to those that refuse his majesty