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AetherGear, the cutting-edge technology that brought about FullDive Virtual Reality and revolutionized the world. When the device's genius creator announced a new game for his system, entirely designed by him, hundreds of millions lined up to play.
Enter the world of New Eden Online, a paradise for those ready to give their all.
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EDIT: This story is on indefinite hiatus as of October 21, 2023. Sorry.
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Never pay to read..... HaHa eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
First of all, thank you for the efforts you put into this story and still leave it free to read. When I looked for new novels, I didn't think I would find a hidden treasure here. I can't understand how this story is still so unknown, but I look forward to how your story progresses. I normally don't write any reviews, but I want to show my support to the author and the great work. For Writing Quality, there is really nothing to complain about. I didn't find any grammar mistakes, which would have interrupted my reading experience. I can't say much to the chapter updates, since I binged the novel up until chapter 83, but I think they are okay. Definitely something to look forward to, when a chapter is released. The Story Development is where I have to take away a star, since from the point when Loran was hurt by the Iron ant (crippled his hand), I lost some of my first optimism for the story. I'm just glad that I still continue to read, because oh boy, that game update in recent chapters with the introduction of the magic system delivered and I'm quite happy that Loran goes for the magic build now. A major point, which actually helpd the story in my opinion are the different POVs of the main cast, that helpf in further developing their character design. My favourite characters as of chapter 83 are Loran, Yin and Yang. I really hope that Yin will find happiness, since her situation seems to be really bad. On the other hand, I'm not quite sure if I like or hate the character of Zed. The world background is steadily being updated as we journey with the main cast. I actually like the village building aspect of the story and hope to see more of the world and other player bases as they appear throughout the story. I'm also wondering if there are any NPCs and their settlements.
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