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In a different universe, after the collision of three galaxies, Nexus, a space linking planets appeared. A great war between the inhabitants of each galaxy erupted for supremacy and continued for hundreds of years,3 mysterious beings appeared and stopped the war, leaving behind a system called Pandora. After a thousand years, Nexus is now a home for different species in pursuit of power, fame, and knowledge. The story follows a half-human boy named Alex with a great sense of adventure but who is also looking for answers about his origin, his only lead is a mysterious key and his unique power of creation.
NOTE: the pace is a little slow and my writing techniques are still lacking, but I promise that it will get better.
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artist: Nimarra
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Write a reviewWOW i wonder how the story will unfold,with multipiles species ,it better have some unique design and new races not only those that we already used to.The killer whale grabbed my attention , let'd see what kind of unique power they will have
I feel like the author could had started with the MC as a ranker or climber ,then used those 4 chapter as a flashback.But then again i can feel that he is trying to built his world then start with the real story .Many majors forces were introducted like the empire , the bureau, and the moonlight company i wish that the author will take advantage of them as the story progress.
Sound good. I just hope that it don't turn into a cliche .The next chapter better give the MC a purpuse since the summury say that he is lokking for answers.Other than that ,Babylon have a lot to offer so I hope the fights will be good.
The world building seem to be unique, some grammar problems ,but I'm not a english native so as long as it's understandable I'm okay.I hope the part were the MC start the tests begin soon .
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The story is promising but i'm starting to lose interest here.A mass release is the best option to handle a slow start ,we all want a good story but what is more important is one with stable updates , the only thing keeping me from dropping is the long chapters, even with the poor grammar the story is still enjoyable ; nothing that can't be fixed with a decent editor.