Well, here I am.
The story has a very smooth beginning and easy-to-know the characters.
I assume that the story will move around this Lily as your MC looks curious about it.
Though, there is some spelling mistakes and grammatical mistakes. I can ignore as it is far better than mine.
Well, here I am. The story has a very smooth beginning and easy-to-know the characters. I assume that the story will move around this Lily as your MC looks curious about it. Though, there is some spelling mistakes and grammatical mistakes. I can ignore as it is far better than mine.