Synopsis
When a game named Author Online was released to the world, it started off a new era for VRMMORPG gaming.
With a newly developed technology that allows 1 hour in real to be 1 year in game, one can truly enjoy it to one’s content.
In a small island off to the right of Mainland Hammer
A boy was born
His name .. If identified, displayed:
Lance
[NPC]
What awaits this NPC? Find out in the novel!
-- Power
Ranking 
-- Power
stone You May Also Like
5Reviews
- Translation Quality
- Stability of Updates
- Story Development
- Character Design
- World Background
Share your thoughts with others
Write a review
Hi! This is Ada, an editor of the international Suspense/Thriller Writing Contest I. I see great potential in your book, but your book is so underrated here. Thus, I invited you to join the contest a week ago. Please reply to me. Let’s discuss in detail.
Come and create your own suspense stories and thrillers !!! Hey! Come and check out our Suspense/Thriller Writing Contest I, where your hard work and talent pay off. If you like suspense stories and thrillers or stories of these sorts, the contest is your world to run. You can refer to the given examples and tips to develop a new story. This might be your chance to begin your writing career, and we have a financial support program for every entry. Moreover, you stand the chance to win the big cash! For more information, you may email adaren06*@*gmail.com (delete *).
Hey Webnovelist! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). A brief introduction along with a few samples or links will be appreciated when reaching out. You might be our next top writer!
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Writing Quality: 3/5 Reason: Just a few minor grammar mistakes, missing words, missing punctuation or overuse of punctuation. Nothing major to note. Stability of Updates: 5/5 Reason: The author is dedicated to his/her craft and has uploaded multiple updates in the past week. Story Development: 5/5 Reason: The story is progressing well, the first chapter was like a prologue chapter and introduced the main character's backstory somewhat well. Character Design: 3/5 Reason: The MC is a small and weak teenager. In the first chapter he is captured when he is 16 years old, gets sold to another country as a slave, and is sold and re-bought multiple times over the next two years due to his weak and small stature. The story opens up when he is approximately 18+ years old. No real big description on the main character yet. But this is good, because we don't see the mental flaws of the character yet. Most other stories have a lot of dumb MCs and that really throws their stories down the drain. World Background: 5/5 Reason: Place names have come up with ****** but good descriptions. The Author System has made its appearance once or twice and still has much room for improvement. Overall: 4.2/5 I'm looking forward to reading more of this story. I only have time to read one chapter a day, so I'll be looking forward to tomorrow to read the next chapter. Despite a few inconsistencies and a weak young ***** main character, I personally like stories where a weak character becomes stronger. Kind of like a coming-of-age but in this case since the MC is already an *****, it's going to be more of a maturing story? We'll see.
Reveal Spoiler