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Write a reviewLooking good so far. Hope author can keep promise of 1 chapter per day. Please donβt end up with unfinished work! ////////////////////////////////////////
MistDreamer here! Since I took up a lot of space in the synopsis space, I will explain the bonus chapter release rules here: 10 Collections: 1 bonus chapter release 100 Collections: 3 bonus chapter release 1000 Collections: 5 bonus chapter release 10k views: 1 bonus chapter release 100k views: 3 bonus chapter release 500k views: 5 bonus chapter release Top 100 Power Ranking? The goal is a little far. We'll see when we get there. π
The story is a frenzy of activities! It accelerates at a lightening speed! I mean there isn't time for you to leave it and you want to know what's next. Very interesting!
This is an initial rating. I will change it with time. I don't see any mistakes but I am not native and my English isn't that good. There is a lot potential in this story but all depends on you. I will check it from time to time and update the review with time. Good luck!
Wow, it's been a while since I've read this kind of military novel, but I really like how the writing reflects the main character's thoughts and stream of consciousness. The world building is good too, even though there are only three chapters so far. I also like the little sound effects haha. Good work overall!
A really interesting story with a well-developed world background and good pace. You're also good at portraying little details like characters' movement and their expressions. Thumbs up! And keep up the good work, author! :)
good writing, interesting story development, world background seems pretty well developed. the fighting scene was well written. I hope MC learns lots of new skills, so the fighting scene will be even greater. I loved the story so far, I can't wait for new chapters! already added to the library.
Everything seems pretty solid so far. The writing and story pacing is pretty good while the characters are sort of interesting and relatable in a way. But the novel is too early to really judge how it will be in the future, but so far it seems like it has plenty of potential
Awesome start! Was really pulled in by the fast pacing in the early chapters, enjoyed the story development and the characters so far, and the background setting of the world is interesting and imaginative. Keep going! πππ
simple soo simple :/ i read 12 eppisode but i dont know soo boring :/ simple soo simple :/ i read 12 eppisode but i dont know soo boring :/ simple soo simple :/ i read 12 eppisode but i dont know soo boring :/
Looking good so far. Hope author can keep promise of 1 chapter per day. Please donβt end up with unfinished work! ////////////////////////////////////////
MistDreamer here! Since I took up a lot of space in the synopsis space, I will explain the bonus chapter release rules here: 10 Collections: 1 bonus chapter release 100 Collections: 3 bonus chapter release 1000 Collections: 5 bonus chapter release 10k views: 1 bonus chapter release 100k views: 3 bonus chapter release 500k views: 5 bonus chapter release Top 100 Power Ranking? The goal is a little far. We'll see when we get there. π
The story is a frenzy of activities! It accelerates at a lightening speed! I mean there isn't time for you to leave it and you want to know what's next. Very interesting!
This is an initial rating. I will change it with time. I don't see any mistakes but I am not native and my English isn't that good. There is a lot potential in this story but all depends on you. I will check it from time to time and update the review with time. Good luck!
Wow, it's been a while since I've read this kind of military novel, but I really like how the writing reflects the main character's thoughts and stream of consciousness. The world building is good too, even though there are only three chapters so far. I also like the little sound effects haha. Good work overall!
A really interesting story with a well-developed world background and good pace. You're also good at portraying little details like characters' movement and their expressions. Thumbs up! And keep up the good work, author! :)
good writing, interesting story development, world background seems pretty well developed. the fighting scene was well written. I hope MC learns lots of new skills, so the fighting scene will be even greater. I loved the story so far, I can't wait for new chapters! already added to the library.
Everything seems pretty solid so far. The writing and story pacing is pretty good while the characters are sort of interesting and relatable in a way. But the novel is too early to really judge how it will be in the future, but so far it seems like it has plenty of potential
Awesome start! Was really pulled in by the fast pacing in the early chapters, enjoyed the story development and the characters so far, and the background setting of the world is interesting and imaginative. Keep going! πππ
simple soo simple :/ i read 12 eppisode but i dont know soo boring :/ simple soo simple :/ i read 12 eppisode but i dont know soo boring :/ simple soo simple :/ i read 12 eppisode but i dont know soo boring :/