Of Particular Half-Ethereal

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Mymylove06

Really well written, love the characters and I think the world you've created is very interesting. And your attention to detail is good as well. I'd recommend this novel to others. Can't wait to read more.

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SPBasilio

The characters are pretty interesting, i am waiting for it to be more in depth and to be explained more in the future, all in all 5 for me, great work author!

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DaoistlP1ti4

Thank you author, just read the first two chapters and I gotta say I'm looking forward to this one! really! definitely recommended one for anybody who's into the fantasy genre with a spicy hint of romance!

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SmokelessSpacey

Huge upside potential, the author obviously knows what he's doing. there's still room for fleshing out of the characters but we're still in the prelude chapters so still time for that. The author is great at the world building and plot setting. definitely a recommended read!

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SpearPointPen

Characters are quite interesting and I'm waiting to see more of them and more depth into them. The type of world the protagonist is in sounds like a quite interesting concept and will be interesting to see more of the world in the future, for example more beasts and monsters... So far we haven't been introduced to a lot of cool or interesting mechanics or powers but thats due to the story being quite young... I'm waiting for the next chapter :)

The concept of one man army is great! I always waited for a lecture in such creative theme. I think U'll find it worth of Your time. I only fear the author will run out of ideas.

I found the concept very interesting - just imagine main character is 500 men at once! Also the writing quality is pretty decent, which makes it pleasant to read. I wish good luck to the author, and look forward to next chapters.