/ Sci-fi / Omnipotent
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Millions of years ago, when science was just starting, a boy with the name of Cane Omni inherited the will of science. Interested with it since little, he mastered things that humans can only dream of from time travel, stopping space and time, increasing life span to even creating small chips that can grant you things that most wouldn't even consider scientific which are superpowers. This is the journey of a 14 year old boy who awakened in the 21st century.
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Too much explanation and less story telling. There are many run-on sentences and grammatical errors in just two chapters. There are common misspelling where words like “Principle” should be “Principal”. Story development, character design, and world background is flimsy at best as there was not really much of a time period that described where the MC woke up in nor is there information that supports the idea. Describing the coffin of ice that has a built in feature takes the “mysteriousness” out of the story. We already know that there is something special about the coffin of ice as ice melts over time. Also, describe the people who are wearing clothes that the MC changes his clothes into as it gives readers an idea of who the MC is trying to emulate. Also, this begs the question of how is the MC able to walk through the main entrance of a building without being stopped? What do you mean 500% body limiter? If your body limiter cap is not at 500%, then don’t write it as a big percentage but rather a smaller one like 5 or .005 percent. In all honestly, the novel reminds me of a very bad story telling of a webcomic called Noblesse. I recommend that you don’t stretch yourself too thin with various other novels that you have written and focus on one novel until you complete it.
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