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One Piece: Anime System (On Hold)
Author: Seven_deadly_sins_
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A man gets chosen to be reincarnated he gets 5 Wishes
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Ohhh hello again,! i see you are writing a One Piece story now, and i also see this is a Harem story with Lemons, so will Nami and her sister Nojiko become MC girlfriends?
The Story is really good and I like how it's not moving slow, but the main problem I have is that there is too many abilities and things going on. I suggest mixing most of the fire abilities into simply "fire manipulation" and moving a bit slower