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Write a reviewIf you put bounty on Marine lot's of innocent will die because Marine can't protect them even though lots of marine are corrupted that doesn't mean everyone is same, so Bad Pirates will raid Marine quarters to kill them for Bounty and they will also kill,r@pe,abuse and torture some Civilian or villagers at same time in Marine base, well al Humans are filled with greed,lust and etc.
I recommend this story......................................................................................................................
we got an arrogant mc who got cheats coming to op, there is close to no detail about the environment, he starts selling stuff right and left. in the entire island, he doesn't meet a single living thing for 8 months, and he has absolutely no problem killing people in brutal ways. really?! and then he goes off spouting BS about this justice and that.
14 chap in. 1.Author make 1 paragraph extremely long so it's not really pleasing to read. 2.Mc is a self-centered guy that thinks that only his justice is right. I feel frustrated reading this to be honest but I hope it get better along the way so I might change the review. 3. He kill God buggy TT
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It started off good and got worse and worse over time. MC is a white knight who preaches justice while killing everyone in his way without caring if some of them are innocent. Basically a complete hypocrite. Story is also riddled with cliches like a typical chinese novel and has some dumb face slapping. Dont waste your time like i did after i read the somewhat ok start. Its a waste of time.
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Reveal SpoilerI really like this novel, the only downside of it is that there is no more chapters I could read... .
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the novel is downright entertaining...... it is one of the few I enjoyed too much...aside from slow chapter update...if got Parton for advance andmore chapters give us I am all for don't drop it.... good plot development and ideas...loved it thanks....
this work is fcking awesome....best fanfic of one piece till date for me....just author sucks at posting updates.............................................
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I like it so much, it has interesting plot. Likeable (read:edgy af) MC.. and fun concept. I hope it Will constantly updated though. It is a good novel.
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Author if you said in the description that the main character was just gonna be another powered murderous sociopath with a hard on for killing anyone he came across that pissed him off, Id be fine, bit the description you kept had me imagining and expecting something different to what you wrote. Kinda disappointed tbh
I really like the book And the way its going but I dislike that he is being dominated by Women who are weaker than him. And i understand its for comedy but Sometimes it GetS a bit too anooying
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I need more chapters ππ. Well written the flow is on point. The smoker move i like it he really more suited to do anything besides being a marine. The only thing is i hope the author upload frequently. Good job thou.
I often imagined a one piece fanfic and what would be the perfect MC. And this character far surpassed what I had thought. In the world where the strong dominate the weak, it was very gratifying to read about someone strong who protects the weak. I confess that I did not have many expectations about this story. But I get excited about each new chapter. I've read very good and rewarding fanfictions like Prison Of The Dead, One Piece Highest Bounty, One Piece Talent System and God Of Soul System, but this one has a much higher potential. The idea of an adventurer guild in one piece is as perfect as chocolate with almonds, lol. I had already seen a fanfiction with the idea of an adventurers guild, but it was discarded by the author. Thank you for that gift to the eye, author. My eyes are pregnant, feed my eyes with more chapters, please, or they will not be born !!!
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Reveal SpoilerNot bad at start, and a good idea I thought, from the title and reading to the part where he gets a shop where he can buy and sell anything from the One Piece World, that the MC would train to become strong enough to protect himself (or make an alliance with the Revolutionaries or sth) and then grow a business to make enough money to live comfortably and at the same time put out bounties on corrupt and evil marines/government people and maybe at the same time cruise through the world with a crew What we get instead is a MC who is slightly retarded and has the morality of a ****stain that makes the arrogant young masters who make everyone die for something look like somewhat decent people. Killing without reason, a lot of swearing and general bad plot, making it seem like the author has anger management issues and lets it all out into this fanfic where he curses all the characters apart from the MC, murmuring "die, kys, you don't deserve to live" while writing. Grammar is also subpar, although still readable 4/5 don't recommend
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Une fan fiction de qualitΓ© !!!!! MERCI POUR Votre travail. L'histoire est fluide et l'objectif du MC est amusant j'ai hΓ’te de lire la suite ne passe pas et lisez se travail car il est agrΓ©able Γ lire et surtout il y a des saine marrantes ππππππΌπΌπΌπΌπΌπΌ
A story better than some. If i were to be picky though, is that for someone with eye problems like i do, it feels like the world is twirling and distorting. Author, please learn how to use spacing properly.
It is a nice story to read for when you want to kill some time. I really like how the story progresses, and the storyβs humor as well. Itβs not one of those stories where the main character becomes over powered immediately, itβs a more gradual process. I really recommend this story.
If you put bounty on Marine lot's of innocent will die because Marine can't protect them even though lots of marine are corrupted that doesn't mean everyone is same, so Bad Pirates will raid Marine quarters to kill them for Bounty and they will also kill,r@pe,abuse and torture some Civilian or villagers at same time in Marine base, well al Humans are filled with greed,lust and etc.
I recommend this story......................................................................................................................
we got an arrogant mc who got cheats coming to op, there is close to no detail about the environment, he starts selling stuff right and left. in the entire island, he doesn't meet a single living thing for 8 months, and he has absolutely no problem killing people in brutal ways. really?! and then he goes off spouting BS about this justice and that.
14 chap in. 1.Author make 1 paragraph extremely long so it's not really pleasing to read. 2.Mc is a self-centered guy that thinks that only his justice is right. I feel frustrated reading this to be honest but I hope it get better along the way so I might change the review. 3. He kill God buggy TT
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It started off good and got worse and worse over time. MC is a white knight who preaches justice while killing everyone in his way without caring if some of them are innocent. Basically a complete hypocrite. Story is also riddled with cliches like a typical chinese novel and has some dumb face slapping. Dont waste your time like i did after i read the somewhat ok start. Its a waste of time.
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Reveal SpoilerI really like this novel, the only downside of it is that there is no more chapters I could read... .
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the novel is downright entertaining...... it is one of the few I enjoyed too much...aside from slow chapter update...if got Parton for advance andmore chapters give us I am all for don't drop it.... good plot development and ideas...loved it thanks....
this work is fcking awesome....best fanfic of one piece till date for me....just author sucks at posting updates.............................................
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I like it so much, it has interesting plot. Likeable (read:edgy af) MC.. and fun concept. I hope it Will constantly updated though. It is a good novel.
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Author if you said in the description that the main character was just gonna be another powered murderous sociopath with a hard on for killing anyone he came across that pissed him off, Id be fine, bit the description you kept had me imagining and expecting something different to what you wrote. Kinda disappointed tbh
I really like the book And the way its going but I dislike that he is being dominated by Women who are weaker than him. And i understand its for comedy but Sometimes it GetS a bit too anooying
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I need more chapters ππ. Well written the flow is on point. The smoker move i like it he really more suited to do anything besides being a marine. The only thing is i hope the author upload frequently. Good job thou.
I often imagined a one piece fanfic and what would be the perfect MC. And this character far surpassed what I had thought. In the world where the strong dominate the weak, it was very gratifying to read about someone strong who protects the weak. I confess that I did not have many expectations about this story. But I get excited about each new chapter. I've read very good and rewarding fanfictions like Prison Of The Dead, One Piece Highest Bounty, One Piece Talent System and God Of Soul System, but this one has a much higher potential. The idea of an adventurer guild in one piece is as perfect as chocolate with almonds, lol. I had already seen a fanfiction with the idea of an adventurers guild, but it was discarded by the author. Thank you for that gift to the eye, author. My eyes are pregnant, feed my eyes with more chapters, please, or they will not be born !!!
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Reveal SpoilerNot bad at start, and a good idea I thought, from the title and reading to the part where he gets a shop where he can buy and sell anything from the One Piece World, that the MC would train to become strong enough to protect himself (or make an alliance with the Revolutionaries or sth) and then grow a business to make enough money to live comfortably and at the same time put out bounties on corrupt and evil marines/government people and maybe at the same time cruise through the world with a crew What we get instead is a MC who is slightly retarded and has the morality of a ****stain that makes the arrogant young masters who make everyone die for something look like somewhat decent people. Killing without reason, a lot of swearing and general bad plot, making it seem like the author has anger management issues and lets it all out into this fanfic where he curses all the characters apart from the MC, murmuring "die, kys, you don't deserve to live" while writing. Grammar is also subpar, although still readable 4/5 don't recommend
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Une fan fiction de qualitΓ© !!!!! MERCI POUR Votre travail. L'histoire est fluide et l'objectif du MC est amusant j'ai hΓ’te de lire la suite ne passe pas et lisez se travail car il est agrΓ©able Γ lire et surtout il y a des saine marrantes ππππππΌπΌπΌπΌπΌπΌ
A story better than some. If i were to be picky though, is that for someone with eye problems like i do, it feels like the world is twirling and distorting. Author, please learn how to use spacing properly.
It is a nice story to read for when you want to kill some time. I really like how the story progresses, and the storyβs humor as well. Itβs not one of those stories where the main character becomes over powered immediately, itβs a more gradual process. I really recommend this story.