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This is really bad. The MC is a simp that is worthless. The transl qualit is awful and hard to read. There should have been actual s.x and not just bs. Read something else!!!
La historia es muy fluida sin tener escenas innecesarias pero hay ligeros desajustes en los números. Pero todo está bien, aunque me hubiera gustado más si hubiera más escenas de conspiración del protagonista.
Até agora não tenho nada a reclamar tô no capitulo 55 e tô gostando muito a comédia é a ação são bem balanceado para não ficar muito enjoativo.
I'm only on chapter 50 and I like the story so far. but I think he's to indulgent with Nami and should put his foot down because like with glasses guy if he had the money there wouldn't have been a problem and what's the point of having it if you don't spend it
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Here is a review from an idiot who have nothing better to do. (won't be accurate because its my opinion) Its just your OP chinese MC type of story. Which mean that the MC is annoying as you can get, and if you can't handle it then you best go read other things. Wouldn't recommend reading it but its your choice. That's all.
What a joke the MC is plain stupid 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
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Great writing. Superb stuff. Hats Off. One of the best OP MC Reincarnators in One Piece that too without a system. Superb mate! I love your work.
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this writer is an Evil Chinese cuck, this novel is torture to read you been warned.
es harem a e i o ua e i o ua e i o ua e i o ua e i o ua e i o ua e i o ua e i o ua e i o ua e i o ua e i o ua e i o ua e i o ua e i o ua e i o ua e i o u
I don't know why this has a very high rating. The mc don't even think before acting. Also the character development for me is 1 star. The mc always says, "Find a safe place to hide and I'll fight them". He is the only one growing while the others is just a decoration.
The story itself is not to bad, but the MC character as well as the one of his Girls is absolutely unbearable. The MC is a Simp in all the worst ways, it is intended to be funny but it's just disgusting
The story was interesting. even though i dont like one piece fanfic because no author can sync with oda’s writing. But After that, it goes downhill for me. As soon as he took the decision to get Nami as the navigator, i cojldnt read anymore. The strawHates should be kept the same because it works so perfectly. as soon as u take nami away from them, it destroys One Piece as we know it and since one piece has such a high ratings in my book, its almost impossible to make any fanfic work if they get too involved in the main story Such as this. There is a way to make this fanfic work and thats by either making the mc another figure like shanka Or ace to Luffy. And later actually make him join the fight/crew in Big mom arc or in wano.
I love your story, but will will have a partner? Because it has romance tag you put as if it were the nami in the beginning, only there focused on the growth of him and the crew, and had his affair with that admiral (I think she's admiral) and ended up being the only part that touches in that direction and the nami disappears and is only mentioned when the "son" of will is in her breasts
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Sincerely? I still read up to chapter 24, but this story isn't for me, MC sympathizes with Nami, even with her horrible personality and Coby suffering as the prota's handyman,But if you like Chinese stories, this is for you
This is really bad. The MC is a simp that is worthless. The transl qualit is awful and hard to read. There should have been actual s.x and not just bs. Read something else!!!
La historia es muy fluida sin tener escenas innecesarias pero hay ligeros desajustes en los números. Pero todo está bien, aunque me hubiera gustado más si hubiera más escenas de conspiración del protagonista.
Até agora não tenho nada a reclamar tô no capitulo 55 e tô gostando muito a comédia é a ação são bem balanceado para não ficar muito enjoativo.
I'm only on chapter 50 and I like the story so far. but I think he's to indulgent with Nami and should put his foot down because like with glasses guy if he had the money there wouldn't have been a problem and what's the point of having it if you don't spend it
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Here is a review from an idiot who have nothing better to do. (won't be accurate because its my opinion) Its just your OP chinese MC type of story. Which mean that the MC is annoying as you can get, and if you can't handle it then you best go read other things. Wouldn't recommend reading it but its your choice. That's all.
What a joke the MC is plain stupid 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
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same as other fanfic onepiece novel going after nami & robin😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
Jeep Goin OR I will not Be friendly…bahaha am joking~ or AM I?! bahaha bahaha bahaha bahaha 🤣🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙏🏻🙃🙃🙏🏻🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙏🏻🙏🏻🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃
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Great writing. Superb stuff. Hats Off. One of the best OP MC Reincarnators in One Piece that too without a system. Superb mate! I love your work.
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this writer is an Evil Chinese cuck, this novel is torture to read you been warned.
es harem a e i o ua e i o ua e i o ua e i o ua e i o ua e i o ua e i o ua e i o ua e i o ua e i o ua e i o ua e i o ua e i o ua e i o ua e i o ua e i o u
I don't know why this has a very high rating. The mc don't even think before acting. Also the character development for me is 1 star. The mc always says, "Find a safe place to hide and I'll fight them". He is the only one growing while the others is just a decoration.
The story itself is not to bad, but the MC character as well as the one of his Girls is absolutely unbearable. The MC is a Simp in all the worst ways, it is intended to be funny but it's just disgusting
The story was interesting. even though i dont like one piece fanfic because no author can sync with oda’s writing. But After that, it goes downhill for me. As soon as he took the decision to get Nami as the navigator, i cojldnt read anymore. The strawHates should be kept the same because it works so perfectly. as soon as u take nami away from them, it destroys One Piece as we know it and since one piece has such a high ratings in my book, its almost impossible to make any fanfic work if they get too involved in the main story Such as this. There is a way to make this fanfic work and thats by either making the mc another figure like shanka Or ace to Luffy. And later actually make him join the fight/crew in Big mom arc or in wano.
I love your story, but will will have a partner? Because it has romance tag you put as if it were the nami in the beginning, only there focused on the growth of him and the crew, and had his affair with that admiral (I think she's admiral) and ended up being the only part that touches in that direction and the nami disappears and is only mentioned when the "son" of will is in her breasts
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Sincerely? I still read up to chapter 24, but this story isn't for me, MC sympathizes with Nami, even with her horrible personality and Coby suffering as the prota's handyman,But if you like Chinese stories, this is for you