/ LGBT+ / One Thousand Deaths (BL)
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Every night, I have the same dream. He comes up to me, I back into the road, and get hit by a car. But that dream suddenly becomes a reality one day, and I find myself in a different world entirely with him by my side every step of the way. The question is, how many times must we die before this loop finally ends?
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Hi jamie! Your story is great! I’d suggest describing the character’s’ appearances a bit more, so the reader can picture what’s going on. Other than that, just keep doing what you’re doing! Good job!
hi jamie. i like your writing so far. you might want to edit a bit more, though. i caught quite a few typos while i was reading. maybe get grammerly or an equivalent? overall it sounds really good. im excited for more!