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the cover looks like a stupid itachi :v Sjdjdkaldbdnfwodnfnflsbxneoxbfjeisicjdkeofbskfowbcienxlwnglsndfjelwksputapitaputaputaputaputaputapitaputaputaputaputaelquelolea
Truthfully i barely can read this novel I don't get the joke, I think that's terrible idea to slips a joke in serious stories of naruto Because i don't feel its funny when it in novel, but sure it would be funny if they were in manga This just my opinion, but still, i appreciate your novel
Your protagonist acts like the kind of sick kid that would ask to play with someones puppy and then drown it because he didn't like how happy the puppy makes people. He's worse than the scum on Davy Jones taint
Well from what I saw in the sypnosis is not entirely correct. All of the strongest character in naruto have a cheat that we call bloodline. There is some people that rely on hardwork like guy and rock that trains in eight gate.
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Start out pretty interesting But around ch 45 up it’s getting boring I don’t know if the mc is gay or not too ...........................................................
It's good, you should read it. NO, seriously stop reading this review, just go read the chapters. Why are you still here? Go read the novel. Are you still here? Then don't forget to use power stone ..
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Ok I like the novel but I don't think it deserves 5 stars but I respect the author so I'll give him 5 stars. Now I don't like the novel because 1. It's slow paced for a fanfic 2. The characters don't act like they are supposed to for example: The 3rd Hokage isn't nearly as manipulative as he was protrayed (Think about what he did to Naruto). 3. There isn't much Character development. There is more but I'm to lazy to type it. I'm taking this out of my library as I believe it's not good enough to wait for more chapters as by the time more chapters are released I'll have forgotten the entire plot
Cooollll....more op more power more to the sharingan.....more.....more .......more.....................................................coooooooklllllll................
More chapters more more and many more please with more op powers....... ................................... ....... .................. .............
Thanks for the chapter. Obrigado pelo capítulo. Dank für das Kapitel. Grazie per il capitolo. Esses números de caracteres é uma merda, 140...
I thought it was dropped... This is the best naruto fanfic on this site.. My only problem is with the lack of updates. 140140140140140140140140140
Will he have a girlfriend? Or maybe two? Or maybe a harem! That's the dream of many guys if they somehow gets reincarnated! ....... Keep up the good work! This story the best!............. Give him a harem k?!............
Lol..can u make someone that not reincarnate in konoha.. u make other nation like evil...only someone dont know real life think like this Mc...
great fic.. i see the potential for this. while the main character is not perfect in terms of personality, the mc is still better than any other mc than any other fics and novels out there(im looking at you jp mcs) story is also great, mc is op but you feel that he is improving at a fast but reasonable pace. other characters are also fun to read as well as the humor in it that will make you do a spittake
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@NololiNoLife hello as a fellow human otaku the likes cough* cough*(you know what it is)I support you and your username and your decision to write this Shiro best girl!
The story is very good. And I like how unique the MC is compared to other generic fanfictions. His development in strength is not too fast and even though he is OP, you could still feel his potential and room for growth. I hope this updates frequently.
.................................................................................. CREATE A THE COVER PLEASE .................................................................................
Originally, when I started reading this novel, I was expectant to see how these two characters would turn out. The slightly less than aware older brother and the emotionally detached younger brother. They have some kind of balancing effect on their two personalities even though the older brother doesn't get much screen time. I was expectant, but now I'm just disappointed. For some reason, the Author has opted to disregard his original story and is now essentially writing different random stories in the middle of the actual story. People in the comment section have been calling these little excerpts "filler". However, this term is incorrect. In order for something to be "filler" it must be part of the original story in some way. There should be a lead-in or some other kind of explanation leading up to the "filler". This does not happen. The Author breaches the actual story randomly with no indication of where or when it begins or even ends. Sometimes he'll switch to a completely different "time period" in the middle of a chapter, other times an entire chapter is one of these "shifts". It comes with no rhyme or reason. He has essentially turned his originally interesting story into a collection of subplot, slapstick comedy "mini-chapters" and doesn't even have the common decency to label where they are for those who wish to skip this nonsense. Overall, I am completely dissatisfied with the current management of this novel. It's an absolute pity. I would've rather not read the story rather than get hooked on it and then be forced to see this author royally **** it up so badly. It's such a damn shame. I don't know why Authors continue to do this. Just because one person tells you "oh, I really enjoyed that chapter where you told the story about that pervert who got punched in the balls and advanced the actual plot in no meaningful way at all." doesn't mean you should actually do it more than the original fucking story.
The text does not deserve such a good evaluation. So take the brick. Catch! ................................................................................
this author gives us something that makes it as if WE are there and WE ar experiencing the feeling of the mc. he always explains things without going out of character, like "oh and this mc has this and that and the reason why" but the author lays out what he thinks bit by bit and why he does it bit by bit so we can piece it togethor
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I rarely review because of 140 characters restriction but this is so good that I decided to review this. a rare gem indeed. We need more like this in the top 20 ranking.... ......................................................................
Very creative and original thinking.... A MUST read.... Amazing story and character development and theme.... Completely different from other Naruto fanfics.. Keep up the good work and just maintain a good update rate....👍👍👍😁😁😀
This novel is simply amazing. It mixes in good laughs with a number of wow so cool moments in one of the best stories of this type I've read. The mc is simply too cool and op, with a wicked sense of humor to boot. One of my favorite fan fictions, can't wait for more.
Why delete? Why not just put a (drop) in the title maybe even an ‘up for adoption’ if you felt like giving it up to someone else? Can you reupload it? (What a shame)
This was Good This was Good This was Good This was Good This was Good This was Good This was Good This was Good This was Good This was Good This was Good This was Good This was Good This was Good
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the cover looks like a stupid itachi :v Sjdjdkaldbdnfwodnfnflsbxneoxbfjeisicjdkeofbskfowbcienxlwnglsndfjelwksputapitaputaputaputaputaputapitaputaputaputaputaelquelolea
Truthfully i barely can read this novel I don't get the joke, I think that's terrible idea to slips a joke in serious stories of naruto Because i don't feel its funny when it in novel, but sure it would be funny if they were in manga This just my opinion, but still, i appreciate your novel
Your protagonist acts like the kind of sick kid that would ask to play with someones puppy and then drown it because he didn't like how happy the puppy makes people. He's worse than the scum on Davy Jones taint
Well from what I saw in the sypnosis is not entirely correct. All of the strongest character in naruto have a cheat that we call bloodline. There is some people that rely on hardwork like guy and rock that trains in eight gate.
Great. For. Xpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxppxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxppxx0pxpxpxpcpzhklnnjaksklxp. Xpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxppxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxppxx0pxpxpxpcpzhklnnjaksklxp
Start out pretty interesting But around ch 45 up it’s getting boring I don’t know if the mc is gay or not too ...........................................................
It's good, you should read it. NO, seriously stop reading this review, just go read the chapters. Why are you still here? Go read the novel. Are you still here? Then don't forget to use power stone ..
Xpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxoxpxpxpxxpxpxpxpxoxpxoxoxoxo zip xoxpxpxpxpxpxpxpppxoxoxpxppxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpoxoxxpxpxppxpxpxpx zapgjgjhfjjxjxjxjdjdjdkxkkdkxkxkxkxkjxjxjdjxjjxjxjdjdjdkidkdkdjdkkdkxkxkxkkx if
Ok I like the novel but I don't think it deserves 5 stars but I respect the author so I'll give him 5 stars. Now I don't like the novel because 1. It's slow paced for a fanfic 2. The characters don't act like they are supposed to for example: The 3rd Hokage isn't nearly as manipulative as he was protrayed (Think about what he did to Naruto). 3. There isn't much Character development. There is more but I'm to lazy to type it. I'm taking this out of my library as I believe it's not good enough to wait for more chapters as by the time more chapters are released I'll have forgotten the entire plot
Cooollll....more op more power more to the sharingan.....more.....more .......more.....................................................coooooooklllllll................
More chapters more more and many more please with more op powers....... ................................... ....... .................. .............
Thanks for the chapter. Obrigado pelo capítulo. Dank für das Kapitel. Grazie per il capitolo. Esses números de caracteres é uma merda, 140...
I thought it was dropped... This is the best naruto fanfic on this site.. My only problem is with the lack of updates. 140140140140140140140140140
Will he have a girlfriend? Or maybe two? Or maybe a harem! That's the dream of many guys if they somehow gets reincarnated! ....... Keep up the good work! This story the best!............. Give him a harem k?!............
Lol..can u make someone that not reincarnate in konoha.. u make other nation like evil...only someone dont know real life think like this Mc...
great fic.. i see the potential for this. while the main character is not perfect in terms of personality, the mc is still better than any other mc than any other fics and novels out there(im looking at you jp mcs) story is also great, mc is op but you feel that he is improving at a fast but reasonable pace. other characters are also fun to read as well as the humor in it that will make you do a spittake
A hidden gem! Top top topTop top Top Top top top Top top Top top Top top Top top Top top topTop top Top Top top top Top top Top top Top top Top top top
@NololiNoLife hello as a fellow human otaku the likes cough* cough*(you know what it is)I support you and your username and your decision to write this Shiro best girl!
The story is very good. And I like how unique the MC is compared to other generic fanfictions. His development in strength is not too fast and even though he is OP, you could still feel his potential and room for growth. I hope this updates frequently.
.................................................................................. CREATE A THE COVER PLEASE .................................................................................
Originally, when I started reading this novel, I was expectant to see how these two characters would turn out. The slightly less than aware older brother and the emotionally detached younger brother. They have some kind of balancing effect on their two personalities even though the older brother doesn't get much screen time. I was expectant, but now I'm just disappointed. For some reason, the Author has opted to disregard his original story and is now essentially writing different random stories in the middle of the actual story. People in the comment section have been calling these little excerpts "filler". However, this term is incorrect. In order for something to be "filler" it must be part of the original story in some way. There should be a lead-in or some other kind of explanation leading up to the "filler". This does not happen. The Author breaches the actual story randomly with no indication of where or when it begins or even ends. Sometimes he'll switch to a completely different "time period" in the middle of a chapter, other times an entire chapter is one of these "shifts". It comes with no rhyme or reason. He has essentially turned his originally interesting story into a collection of subplot, slapstick comedy "mini-chapters" and doesn't even have the common decency to label where they are for those who wish to skip this nonsense. Overall, I am completely dissatisfied with the current management of this novel. It's an absolute pity. I would've rather not read the story rather than get hooked on it and then be forced to see this author royally **** it up so badly. It's such a damn shame. I don't know why Authors continue to do this. Just because one person tells you "oh, I really enjoyed that chapter where you told the story about that pervert who got punched in the balls and advanced the actual plot in no meaningful way at all." doesn't mean you should actually do it more than the original fucking story.
The text does not deserve such a good evaluation. So take the brick. Catch! ................................................................................
this author gives us something that makes it as if WE are there and WE ar experiencing the feeling of the mc. he always explains things without going out of character, like "oh and this mc has this and that and the reason why" but the author lays out what he thinks bit by bit and why he does it bit by bit so we can piece it togethor
Reveal Spoiler I rarely review because of 140 characters restriction but this is so good that I decided to review this. a rare gem indeed. We need more like this in the top 20 ranking.... ......................................................................
Very creative and original thinking.... A MUST read.... Amazing story and character development and theme.... Completely different from other Naruto fanfics.. Keep up the good work and just maintain a good update rate....👍👍👍😁😁😀
This novel is simply amazing. It mixes in good laughs with a number of wow so cool moments in one of the best stories of this type I've read. The mc is simply too cool and op, with a wicked sense of humor to boot. One of my favorite fan fictions, can't wait for more.
Why delete? Why not just put a (drop) in the title maybe even an ‘up for adoption’ if you felt like giving it up to someone else? Can you reupload it? (What a shame)