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I have stopped working on this novel. Instead, I am reworking it into a better one called Overlord: The Untold Tales
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(Copied from comment in Chapter 1) - Review for initial thoughts. The length of each chapter if continued like this; makes the story seem split up into perfect slices of a once perfect cake, together each slice holds a great amount of information, invaluable without one another. The use of words also invoke imagery, easily portraying the chapter like a moving film. Although I know this may not be released often, however I am keen for any new chapters as it feels like this story had the potential to be what Overlord (LN) couldn't be
This is a review for the current two chapters ( 4 / 5 / 2019) The layout of the novel is similar to Overlord (LN), however not as forgiving. The destruction and devastation caused by Ulbert and his minions will be unlike the exterminations the Demons and Demi-Humans suffered at the hands of the 'Six Great Gods'. Ulbert doesn't aim to be the hero for the masses. Ulbert knows the feeling of being exploited and inability to help people because of the wealthy's tight grip on industries, denying families a happy or peaceful life. Whether he sympathises with exploited people is whether he denies his demonic side or he accepts it. The quality of story structure, grammar and punctuation still retains from the first chapter, and hopefully for future chapters as well. On a side note I am grateful for the author RKD_RR for continuing the novel.
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