Pokémon: Thunder Hunter

LV 4

Zenkaiboost

Great story. Author says he lacks pokemon knowledge, but from what i see his knowledge is better than 99% of stories on this site. Story flows quite fluently l and the author didn't give mc absurdly strong and rare pokemons.(not at this moment). Most pokemon fanfics only care about how much rare pokemon mc got and not much about the pokemon's character, background and stuff. So this is quite surprising for me to see a story where both pokemon and human characters are developed well. (In this site). Please keep writing this amazing fanfic author.

LV 14

Shisui34

Wow!!!! What a wonderful story. I really like it a lot. The quality, and thought out into the story I simply breathing. You really have a great understanding of how to paint emotion and pictures with words. I like what you have done to make it seem like a reasonable story that is realistic enough that I could see it actually happening. Thank you for writing this and I hope you consider picking this story back up.👍🏻😁☺️🤯🤗🥺

LV 6

FoolUniverse

This a great and unique novel and I really hope you keep it up cuz it has great potential and I looking forward for more chapters 😁😁😁😁😁

LV 6

Weirdo

Good enough for me. Good grammar, a bit above average of plot line which is good and better than most bad fanfic, great spacing, nice length of chapter... A bit rigid and awkwardness, but overall nice... To grammar Nazi, this fanfic is for you. Maybe.

LV 5

japprentice

I liked what's written so far. Keep up the good work. I can only hope this doesn't become another abandoned fanfic. There are lots of them out there ; good stories with potential but short life span. The story seems to have lighting Pokémon theme going, but I would suggest not to follow it too rigidly. Having few other types in the team would be good. Best of luck. May this story survive past 50 chapters.

LV 2

King_Yosh

I wish some good author picks this up or if possible the original author come back. It has so much potential that could be unearthed with the setting. I like the electric typing and there arent much fanfics of MC specializing in it except from few Volkner self insert or OG fanfics. Ive seen the author comment to a novel a month ago so at least it gets me knowing that he's alive. Dude. Author. Ive got lots of ideas but I aint just good at writing novels. If you need ideas for this i can help a bit. Come on dude, stop the hiatus and continue this. Its good. Hope u respond.

LV 14

TwistedUExile

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