Pomegranates For Dinner

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Angel_Bakare

I like Coraline,she’s different from many romance female characters on this app with her crude outbursts!

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Adrian_Jeremy

This is a beautifully written novel. The characters - just 4 chapters in - are exceptionally crafted. I can vividly imagine Caroline being a real person: a kind soul carrying an unfathomable weight with her and facing the unfairness of life with the best she can. Irene, an angel on Earth, doing her best to support her friend, her lover. I'll be honest. This isn't my favorite genre to read. I love action, adventure, epic fantasy worlds. But, this novel will be one of the few exceptions to the rule - I can already tell. I'm extremely excited to see where the story goes and (hopefully!) to discover some kind of happy ending for Caroline.

First off the grammar is pretty good, there werent any mistakes that i really noticed on that front. i like the dynamic of the relationship between Coraline and Irene. how Coraline did something really f***ed up and that she has to keep up that secret to maintain their relationship. Theres a lot that can be done with that. I like how Coraline is protrayed as a calculating woman, and the fact that she finds rumours about her unpleasant is very human. some novels just have the characters not talk about it, or theyre portrayed as not caring which i just cant wrap my head around. The characters actually seem real with their baggage and personalities, another thing that is usually difficult for other authors. all in all i think this could be a very intriguing read for someone into this sort of novel.

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AuHNG

FINIShed reading all chapters. Waiting for more! + Makethe revenge more clear from the beginning! (Words words words words words words words words)

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Rosewater15

I first thought this would be another cliche romance, but the story is actually much better! your writing also makes sense and the pacing is fine (personally a tad bit slow but just personally~)

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Knightofthedead

Fantastic novel, the story is very interesting and the writing quality is nice. I love how the pace is going. Keep up the work author. [img=update]

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Burningnova13

I like your character. I always enjoy someone who makes plans and works towards achieving them. It isn't someone evil either, so that's some points too. I wouldn't mind more information about the world in general and the important figures, but that's asking too much in the first chapters. I'm guessing it will be explained later and more progressively to avoid being an info dump.

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Nikage

I'm not really that much of a romance fan. But this book is starting to change that, I love the synopsis especially, Coraline found love in the way nobody expected? Looking forward to that

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Spider_Thief

Interesting story, the events were well described, and the MC's motives were pretty easy to understand, I also think the poetry in this novel is also well done! Definitely looking forward to more chapters and such.[img=update]

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TSHurley

Your did an amazing job writing this story. You added some real good descriptions, love it. This made me want to read more. Keep up the hard work.

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LordShivaStories

Interesting the story is going. It defines the imagery of the scenes so that the readers can feel the scenario but it is also written simple language easy to understand. Now the poetry in this novel is also well written no doubt that. I fell in love with the characters and also the title since it's rather unique

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Benelohim

I never read any romance book before, but i kinda like the way the story is written, good pace i only have one request, and it is to explain or add more info for the characters because i felt lost at some point.

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Rarajasmin_jazz

it's really an I amazing book.I loved the way you portrayed the character Caroline.its really a page turning book.i will keep reading it