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Hello everyone, unfortunately, i had to republish this story under a new page, in order to enter the WSA, please go there to check it out, as all updates will be there now.
Please do not use power stones on this novel, use it on the new one.
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It's really a good fantasy adventure novel. I liked how wonderfully explained everything was and scenes were shifting smoothly one after another. Every situation was well explained with respect to character's thought, the situation around and the plot development. There were a few grammar mistakes, but it's hardly noticeable. If you are looking for an adventure story with strong FL, I would definitely suggest you to read this one as once you start reading, you won't stop until it's finished. Good luck author!
I just sat staring at my screen for a good while trying to figure out what exactly I liked about this story and when there were too much thoughts in my mind all at once, I began to write this sentence. Maybe its because I'm not a really picky reader but I really enjoyed reading this novel. There's just something about it at made me stick around until the very end of each chapter. Of course I am writing this review now while there are still some chapters for me to read because I don't want to forget to leave a review after I binge this. Great work!
Its good! I mean, it has a simplistic feel to it but frankly when i started reading, i kept wanting to know what happened next so i added it to my library! The plot is intriguing and the FL is brave! I loved it! I'm sure you would too.
Now I gave character design a low rating because you didn't focus on Shi. Why not use Shi to explain why the village isn't prosperous maybe she remembers an incident when the clans withdrew their support and the town slowly slid into despair. Stop telling me and show me through Shi's eyes not yours
Wonderful story. I liked how it progressed and i will be looking forward for reading more. Btw, your writing style is amazing. [img=update][img=update][img=update]
Great stuff, just started it, and i've enjoyed it a lot so far, can't wait for more chapters. Love yuri, and seeing that this will have it, i can't wait to see more.
Shameless review here, feel free to read my novel and share your thoughts and feedback. Always looking to grow and improve as a writer. If you have any questions feel free to leave a comment!
I have read up to the first 6 chapters and I would say so far so good, the world seems interesting, although sometimes the author would refer to the main character as a he and sometimes as a she, which confused me for a bit. The premise isn't anything ground breaking or new but interesting enough to keep me invested. Good job
I was only going to read 2 to 3 chapters but before I knew it I was in chapter 5, you are a good author, you protest the characters quite well, and the storyline you know how to string the readers making them want more..now that I have written my review let me get back to reading your book
From the very beginning of the story, a lot of care and attention is put into writing the world and character's personality linguistics. However, from the first few chapters the story is very slow paced and can put off readers but that isn't a bad thing considering the skill of the writer. Further down the line, I am confident to say that author will grab your attention.
I love everything about the story. It has a strong FL which is one thing I love about these kinds of stories. I could see the scenes and every other thing as it was perfectly described by the author. The world building is good. The book is promising and I didn't notice any err, maybe because I was intoxicated in the story. Keep it up, author 💜
Ok... here is my review for the novel.... i am a very picky person when it comes to reading and once i spotted something bad i would immediately dropped it... but!!! compared to most stories i quite like this one and felt it's more refreshing and i got hooked when i read the first chapter, my review may change depending on how the story goes but i have a high expectations on the writer so i do suggest reading this story
I have reached the latest chapters and I can say with a solid mind that this is a good story. It keeps you interested to know what's going to happen next, the main character is a strong Female Lead that also has normal emotions like everyone else. And her abilities are cool!