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Synopsis
Living forever and wandering from one world to another on the whims of a system that bound itself to you without a single 'by your leave' isn't all that it's cracked up to be.
Su Li dies of chronic illness and is bound to such a system. Now, this could be considered a blessing in disguise for others.
However, the trouble is that she isn't interested in a system and to compound it all, two men - two distinctly different men - keep on following her on this world-hopping business.
Two men as incompatible as fire and water, as different as the sun and the moon.
The only thing they share in common is Su Li and their sheer determination to not leave her side.
One of them remembers their past worlds each time they start anew, whereas the other doesn't.
One of them says that she lights up his dark world and the other says that she is his entire world.
One of them says that it doesn't matter if she loves him or not, she is his to cherish and pamper.
The other says that she is the only one he would ever love.
Though sceptical and wary, Su Li decides to put her best foot forward and make the best out of her circumstances.
Why are these two men trailing her?
Will she be able to get rid of the shackles placed on her by the system?
Will she repudiate her deal with the system?
Will she find out the answers to all her doubts and questions or will silence and melancholy be her only answer?
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An excerpt from the book :
"You care that much about Zixi? Because of him, you are ready to discard concerns about your own safety? Is it worth it? Is Xun Zixi really worth it?"
Su Li was agitated by Li Rong's unceasing questions.
She weighed her words properly and said in a hoarse voice, "It's worth it."
Suddenly her eyes glazed in tears and she repeated her words, "He is worth it to me."
Li Rong was stunned to see her in tears and was rendered speechless by the conviction behind her answer.
"Well, I can't change your mind. You won't leave him in a lurch and I can't turn my back on you."
They rushed back the way they had come and prayed that it wouldn't be too late on their part.
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Write a reviewI am really enjoying the story very much. The idea of two ML's great and I just can't wait for more.!!!! Thumbs up to the Author!!! Keep up the good work.
Fufufu~ I wanted to give a review too 😗 It's hard to find a decent Quick transmigration novel with a female lead that I haven't read. Happy to find this gem~ Has stable updates and the plotline is progressing quite well, it has been only the first arc so far but I love it :p Keep doing you thing author-san!
Sorry if this review will make people angry or something. Sorry to author for late review. Honestly, I have add-in this novel in library 2 days ago but hesitate to read till today. It because of the cover, 1st impression is it not attracting and feel not relating to the title. After read for few chapters, yup, this story is quite interesting and well developed in character and background. Good job author. Sorry to say this, my problem is, it just i feel so suffocate when chapter has long lenght (word count apprx between 1300-1700). Sometime i also feel like the story give a reason for his/her certain action or story telling (on why/what happen/what he/she gonna do next - for example: using therefore / then). Anyway, good job author. Keep it up. For sure many readers will read this interesting story. I will recommended to my friends.
Reveal Spoiler3..2..1.. [It's review system here! Welcome to the review world!] Lol. I came here and intended to read your story from a writer perspective but then.. Boom! There I go reverted back to being just a reader that was lost in a good story! I didn't expect that I could find a good novel system here, this is a hidden gem. I'm anticipating for more chapter and improvement from the author.
So amazing to stumble upon such a hidden gem. Really waiting for more. I actually like the world and characters. Can't wait for more updates
i love it! more author! please don't drop it! ^_^ i love it! more author! please don't drop it! ^_^ i love it! more author! please don't drop it! ^_^ i love it! more author! please don't drop it! ^_^ i love it! more author! please don't drop it! ^_^ i love it! more author! please don't drop it! ^_^ i love it! more author! please don't drop it! ^_^
Reveal SpoilerThe novel has a very good concept of a female which is important for two men which are contrary of each other,the novel's author is very experienced and it is shown in quality of her novel,the synopsis is enough to understand how good the novel is.
The first few chapters are hard to read. Once you get past the grammar, redundancy and big words that you have to look up and find out that some a poorly used it's a great read. It keeps you wondering what will happen next and why there is a system in place. Unfortunately the author has a hard time keep the time line, spelling of characters name and the characters themselves straight. Example mom dies a "short few years" after the FL birth but later on you read she was drilled in etiquette from her mother? Few years is 4 minimum then you find out no it was actually at the age of ten. A full decade later. Another is when the FL leaves, gone for four years, then it's three years. As for the romance it's a bit lacking, the FL is very distant but Li Rong's and Yu Yan's scene of mistaken intimacy (though it was very small) was heart racing! You could feel her pain when she finds out he mistakes her for someone else. The story is far from cliche and it's interesting that she could get transmigrated again after she passes.
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So many information in first and second chapter. My head became hot. English is not my native. So I needed to read it carefully to remember all information. writing quality = I didn't know
Heya, it has been a while since I gave a high rating. As expected of a professor, wide range of vocabulary, attention to story details and good writing style. World building is one element that most authors are lacking, but you have done well on taking your time building it. No forced encounters (ignoring standard transmigration), no avoidance of details. Good job. Now, there are two things that you lacked. First is your use of comma. I suggest you to read the sentence you have written in your heart out loud, when you feel that it needs a pause, add a comma. Missing commas are minor mistakes, but without it, some readers may need to re-read the sentence. (you may consider a light proofreader) Second is your use of parentheses in your earlier chaps. I don't know the reason why you use them if you can just do it without them. I noticed that some sentences inside the parentheses are side details; try to merge it with the main story. This one is just my preference, but may I suggest you to avoid en-dashes and use em-dashes instead. For some reason, WN converts en-dash into hyphen.
Great Novel! It is a must-read, I quickly devoured and poured over the novel in a few days. Can not wait for more to come down the pipe. I would recommend it anybody to read since it is such a great!
Synopsis sounds intriguing. The plot is exciting, original as far as one can judge by the work on the objection. Intriguing how the system works? What kind of functions does it have, is it sarcastic, caustic, rude, obsessive, humorous or tyrannical? We will read. I think chapters 5, it will be enough to understand the point. Thanks to the author for his hard work, is it cool to write more than 100 chapters that have been viewed by more than half a million people? !!! It speaks for itself. Interestingly written dialogues, task setting system, not very trivial !!! And here, the duplicate images of chapter 2 have already gone, but let's see if the author will be able to introduce something new? It is interesting in chapter 3 that the author was able to masterfully bring to life, this is an original idea! Bravo author! The world in which the heroine lives is well described, it is not as simple as it seems at first glance. A well-written novel, interesting, with an intriguing plot, the beginning of the chapter, you do not know at all what its end will be. The author well understands the world that he describes, and knows the psychology of his heroes. In general, after reading 5 chapters, I liked the novel. One could put 4.8 stars. Due to interruptions in the update, only a couple of chapters were released in August and September. But as an author, I know that problems could arise in real life, which sometimes do not give time, no strength, desire, creative activity is falling. So 5 stars, for the fact that the author still wrote the chapters, and made up for lost time in October. Respect. It was interesting to read! I gave 1 stone for promotion!
Reveal SpoilerThis is a clever transmigration story. I love that it's not just about switching places. It actually makes you think and suck you in through the cinematic setting pretty quick. Go for it!
First, LOVE the cover! It definitely attracts readers to the story. Read the first 5 chapters and had to write a review! Subscribing now so I can finish the story!
It's well written and it's like reading one short story after another but are connected with a string of one wonderful yet sorrowful event. The author is also soooo kind and considerate to give extra chapter or mass release everytime she feel like to😉
A great story. I have read a lot of transmigration stories yet non of them show so much emotion and internal turmoil as this one does. Every character is special in his or her own way and it's a joy reading about them. Keep up the good work I can't wait for more chapters. ❤
The synopsis seems quite mysterious. I really couldn't tell what this story contains. But that's the point. It's mysterious. The synopsis is well written and quite mysterious. But the only thing I could understand was system and transmigration and who don't like this genre. I am sure that this story is full of surprises. <3<3
Author Shiksha_Jerath
Heya everyone I really didn't want to review my own novel but am writing this to inform everyone the I have edited the first arc. Therefore, all the paragraph length problems and the few grammatical errors that were sprinkled here and there have also been solved. More than the paragraph length, I had been worried about any grammatical errors that I had made since am one of those Grammar Nazis lol Don't forget to read, review, recommend, vote and comment on the story. Those few things are infinitely sweeter than marshmallows to me 😁😂😛