RE: Black-Light

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Aaron_Chong_6689

I forgot to put my shameless author review which is a bummer; but hey, I can do it now! First to start, the grammar, although it has it's faults aren't much of an issue at all, and can easily be deciphered... Next is the plot; Nothing much here other than what can be found in particular canons, it seems to be growing however, so I have high hopes for it.[img=recommend] The mc: The mc is just absorbing creatures, growing stronger, and helping along the way as of the latest chapter, he isn't all good, nor particularly evil/ruthless, but more of a neutral, borderline good. He makes little mistakes here and there, but he is developing, as well as his abilities too. All in all the story is good, having a pretty accurate powering system to boot, with characters having actual personality...

LV 14

hizer0778

love with what you have started just one thing, is it gonna be harem??????

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Angel_Whis

this is definitely worth reading. it's engaging enough to stop the readers from skipping the chapters. and I have read 14 chapter something and I can definitely vouch for this fanfiction. pls don't stop posting it.

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AlexCyberHeart

5/5/3/3/2 it is fine so far but I really hate it when an author increases values and stats that are not being trained a significant amount for no reason it is like you are studying physics but because it has some relation to both chemistry and biology you become an expert at both as well

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Robogamer1104

So far the only real problem i can find would be the grammer and even then it's not to the point where it's unreadable just needs a bit of work. All in all a good story as of chapter 20.

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Omar_Alflh

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asss_hole

The story background is good but the Mc is obsessed with keeping the plot the same and not changing it

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Luizz_Ricardo

author updates more chapters for us🗿🍷..........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................