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Alex Sheppard Was an American made man, He was a Seal and a master of combat, Alex Died an early death in Afghanistan by a careless mistake by a God,
Alex was Dead... God was Ashamed and decided to repay the soul that paid the price for his careless mistake,
Reincarnating into The World of 'Merlin' for the first world,
[AN - So I'm a big fan of the series 'Merlin' so I decided to make my own fanfiction of it! If you have seen the series then you likely understand... That ending! God! They need a sequel!!!]
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Finally a Merlin fan fiction! I absolutely love it, and as you said, it indeed requires a sequel, I've been searching for a Merlin FF in a while. Anywayyyyy, I give a full 5 stars!
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As fellow Merlin fan I MUST criticize you: Why, just why did it say "this work doesn't support power stones" I don't have much but I really wished to appreciate your work with them. So it's your own fault, you've pushed so far, to the brink of side-splitting So... Here we go: Good job Good work Good work of art 👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻 Good job Good work Good work of art 👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻 Good job Good work Good work of art 👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻 Good job Good work Good work of art 👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻 Good job Good work Good work of art 👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻 Good job Good work Good work of art 👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻 Good job Good work Good work of art 👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻 Good job Good work Good work of art 👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻 And compliments to the fellow fandom member👌
Okei he meets Merlin and talks to him melin trusts him easily because he is also a wizard I can handle it but you meet Gaius and he writes you a recommendation?Why? Because he finds you nice? he doesn't even know you, And then suddenly you have a room next to Morgana? Does that mean you'll be let into the castle?! Because a doctor writes you a recommendation and not only that you even have a room next to the king's ward? That doesn't make any sense you are an unknown, Uther kills people for far less, he would never let a stranger into the castle let alone near Morgana, magic is forbidden in Camelot, times are troubled, Caius has become very wise through his long experience with Uther and magic. the way you present your characters is strange logic and rationality do not count here I recommend a rewrite, take a look again at the Series might help I know that this is a fan fic, but you have to build some logic and reason behind it otherwise your story does not make the slightest sense There is not much to see here