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Ren, a die hard otaku, lived his life watching Naruto becoming a complete shut in. One day he suddenly dies of a heart attack only to find himself in the Naruto World.
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It's okay. keep up the good work.......... don't drop it. 1............................................................................................................................................
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Shameless 4.4 stars from me because I know my story will have much better plot development and little grammatical errors. Be ready for a ride on my very first fanfiction!
Hey. I really like your novel! I download the app on boredom and saw that it was mainly novels. Got disappointed a bit, but decided to read one to see if it was good. I pick yours first and thought it was fantastic.! I don't read much novel mainly manga and comics. Anyway, I thought you wrote a great story and praying you write more. Keep up the good work.!!
The MC is not OP, no problem, it's even a plus. The MC progresses slowly and is not at the same level as the others, it goes and makes it even more interesting. By cons that the MC acts like an idiot despite all the knowledge of his life spent as otaku, there it does not pass. Because it's the type of MC that annoys me. But thanks anyway for this fanfiction and good luck.👍👍👍👍👍👍 Sorry English is not my language and it's largely Google Trad.
First of all, i love this novel. It based on Naruto world. But the most i hate, wheres the rest chapter? Please don't drop this novel. I already read this novel 5th Times. Hahaha...
I think that this novel is probably going to be one of the best that I have read as long as you keep working on it and update more chapters ----------------------------------------------------------------------------
Really good, I look forward to the continuation! He falls into my library without hesitation 140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...
I love Naruto and especially without much cheats. Those novel gives me both and I love it. I am wondering how our MC will survive the massacre and how will he get strong, strong enough to stay alive and change the events.
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The first few chapters were bearable but I can't take it anymore. The first few chapters were bearable but I can't take it anymore. The first few chapters were bearable but I can't take it anymore.
It will be completely different plot that he has kill kabuto cuz kabuto the one that enable sasuke's rennegan. ...[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Tipo, é legal e tal... mas foi largada. Iqbdownsodn2odbodwndpwnodbeoeb39eb9dn29xneowndpebdofeosnobtib1oqnsodbe0rn3 comi o c* de quém tá lendo
Writing quality:4. There are mistakes, but nothing major. Stability of updates:5. pretty frequent. can be attributed to the fact that the chapters are relatively short. story development:2. the story is moving along but with the use of lots of time skips to get past things so you can't really say things have developed. Even the first mission in the new team 2 ended up as MC escort merchants -> gets attacked -> chase enemy off -> end. character design:2. characters are feeling very bland. the cause could be the lack of description as author seems to assumes everyone read the manga or watched the anime (we probably did and that is why characters in this novel seems bland in my opinion). another cause could be how author is explaining everything with 3rd person narrations. world background:2. suffers from same reason as character design. follows the Naruto plot but there is little description of everything because again, there is probably the assumption we read the manga/ saw the anime. Chapters are very very short. the cause of this is the summarization of just about everything into a few paragraphs which then leads to poor character design and world background. To fix this, the author should realize that while many readers of fanfics have probably seen/read the anime/manga, the novel is a separate entity. Details (no matter how little or how much) are a must in order to paint a vivid scene for the reader's imagination. It would also serve to lengthen the short chapters a bit. MC has reincarnated and wanted to change how things became yet all we have seen is the MC just training. In the recent chapters we have seen MC realize this and then lashes out when the family questions Itachi...and then nothing because MC just lies down and wonders how the future has changed. perhaps MC will actually do something in the chapters down the line, but as of the current status, its as if the author wants to change things but doesn't know how to go about it. MC is basically all talk and no action because author wants to change things but not deviate the storyline too far because he doesn't seem to know how to develop the world afterwards. This is the feeling i'm getting so far. PLOT HOLES. #1. THE BIGGEST ONE EVER. Danzo, leader of the root, places seals on all root members so that they cannot betray him. The author's belief that Ren can just up and leave when he is done is just the widest gaping hole there could ever be. Even if Ren wants to break the seal, author has not written about anything about seals and/or about Ren learning it. Given how weak the author wrote Ren to be, its hard to imagine him ever breaking free. #2 Another plot hole. a seven swordsman of the mist attacks Ren and his team on their first mission. First of all, in the original manga/anime, the 3rd great shinobi war is already near its end by the time Itachi was around a couple years old. As a twin, Ren should also be of similar age at this time, not even in the academy yet so the fight between Ren and the original seven swordsman is impossible because they were dead in the middle of the war and heir weapons mostly lost. MC wants to change things but hasn't really done anything at all so therefore, time line events should still closely follow the lore of the manga/anime, making this fight virtually impossible logically. #3. MC only knowing chidori is quite a big plot hole for a supposedly reincarnated person who has watched the entire series. watching the entire series, even if the village doesn't have jutsu, he could try to learn what he saw in the anime. even if he doesn't know the hand seals he can just develop them because he already has the direction from seeing it in the anime. Yet, all we have seen is MC learning only chidori in his entire life... even if it could be stretched out and made to work, what about other jutsu? shadow clone? or even the most basic clone taught to students? limited by chakra? why not try the 8 forbidden gates whose only requirement is taijutsu?<- might require learning from Might Gai or from scrolls which shouldn't be a problem seeing how he joined anbu and should have access to them. If you can stomach the flaws, then you can probably enjoy this novel or it will at least be a good time waster while you wait for other novels to update. If you can't, you had best go elsewhere because you probably won't like this.
Good story, keep going because it has a lot of potential and you can make something special.It s one of the best novels.------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Its good so dont drop it. Keep it going. Your doong a good jobb................................................................................ .
The story is good. Very different from the story I read. The story is all about a boy reincarnated as Ren Uchiha his brother is Itachi Uchiha who have the affinity of fire and Ten have the affinity of lighting. There father was proud of Itachi because he have the affinity of fire that should be the Uchiha's power . But then Ren work hard to surpass Itachi. Then when the time comes to join him to ANBU but he got rejected. But then some guy offer him to join to the Root.
Great story. I loved the story development and character design a lot, please write more. the writing quality is pretty good too, i really like that the MC is not powerful at the start and has to work hard to get to be as strong as he is.
The story so far within this novel is alright as the MC is not OP which would male the story boring however the MC in my opinion is far too weak and you the author would need to make sure that the MC become stronger as least able to protect the people close to him and not get killed hopefully
Hhhmmm..... Is this once a day update novel? I Cant wait long for update :) u make Its world as same as Naruto world. That intertain me so much. Love itu more
I've almost never seen a Mc as stupid as this one. Reincarnated in Naruto's world, he was supposed to be an Otaku before. Even so, he not only has no talent but doesnt even use his knowledge to help his family, nor does he train accordingly to basic knowledge in the Manga. I can accept the lack of talent as it is kinda refreshing but he is just too stupid for me. Apart from that, the writing is OK, at least it's grammarly correct most of the times.