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Story of a Goddess that is betrayed and killed in her first life she is reborn into a new world with the same laws as her old. Read as Navi lives her new life while regaining her strength in order to seek revenge.(A/N: First original story trying. Hope you guys enjoy and comment down below for any tips you wish to give.
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It’s literally a down-graded version of Nanomancer Reborn - I’ve become a Snowgirl? I stopped at chap. 6 because it was too much for me. I mean, you could at least try to make your own plot a little.. but it is exactly the same thing but more rushed and with some little change here and there. It doesn’t even feel realistic because it is so much rushed .. Well, I understand the fact that you wanted to re-create a version of Nanomancer of your own, but atleast quote the Novel, and put a little more efforts in to it .. No offence ! Cya.
Ok so, as of now, the novels looks pretty good, though for someone who loves killing humans and swore to never trust someone again, the MC already spills the beans for the 2 people she just met, I know she did the contract and all but this could have been worked better, Also make the fights a little longer and more detailed that the novel will Be all good
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It is just a ripoff of nanomanser reborn. Read that masterpiece instead of a blatant ripoff. The only good thing is the number of updates due to having great material to copy.
This gives off immense Nanomancer, the beginning giving off nearly the identical start. Very bothered continuing ahead of the novel because from what I've seen, too many chapters are filled with stats and numbers filling up half the chapters.
Sangat mirip dengan Nanomancer Reborn - i'v becoming snow girl. Tapi Mc jauh lebih Op dan plot berjalan dengan sangat cepat. Kemiripan novel ini lebih dari 90% karena fondasi dalam novel sama persis tapi penulis membuat segalanya jauh lebih sederhana.
First, I will admit that I have not read much of this novel as I became pretty pissed after I read the first couple of chapters so ignore what my stars say as that’s pretty inaccurate to what I believe this novel should be, I just want to be as fair as possible as I have not read all the way through to the most recent chapter. The reason this novel pissed me off so much to the point that I dropped it within only 6 chapters is because I’ve already read it in the form of Nanomancer reborn except this version is just a washed up version of the book. This is apparent in the leveling system, the described world, the mc’s backstory and even the mc personality as they are nearly a carbon copy of Shiro (MC of Nanomancer if you don’t know) with the only differences being their races and how they deal with their problems. The author’s fetish also pops up pretty fast as the first class up, the mc immediately gets a “bubbly butt and bigger chest” and if you read his other novel, you will definitely notice this almost exact phrase repeated over and over again which irritates me. I had accepted it in the other novel as I got that it was more of a fanfic then a novel like this one, however it does not work nearly as well here. I get an author’s fetish can serve as inspiration for their books however it should NEVER be this apparent in a novel like this one. The only positive thing that I had noticed for the novel is that the grammar is pretty good from what I noticed. For those that see this novel and become interested and think they should try to pick it up, here is what I recommend: read Nanomancer reborn first as you will then get an understanding of this world as well, doesn’t have to be the whole thing, just read to about chapter 20 or something; read the first 5 chapters of this novel. Once you do these, then decide if you want to continue this novel. If you do enjoy it and continue reading then tell me and then I’ll try it again as I really did want to read this novel as I liked the author’s other novel however it reminded me of Nanomancer way too much and I’m a big fan of that book and am very up to date on the chapters.
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Its a worse version of I've become a snow girl. The grammar is sub par and its like reading the summary on the back of a book. The author needs to expand outside of 'she beat him up'. Also you clearly said she has trust issues, yet the first teenager she meets she trusts. The random all caps screaming is also annoying as ****.
Great story. Tho the continue reca** get a bit annoying for the short chapter. If the chapter becomes a little longer with less recap I think it'd be an even better read.
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The story is pretty good but there are things that could be better. Pretty much anything about her spells we know nothing about. Not how many spells she has, nor anything about any of her other powers too. The whole thing about her trust issues could’ve been done in a smoother way. It felt kinda rushed or not genuine.
This book is great but lack in writing. First language of the author might not be English. Otherwise it’s great. Keep up the good work. 👍🙏
It was good until sge started killing everyone. But this is what i think i don't realy like the mc going and killimg innocent ppl in any books its just me so if you could make another like this but with a mc that doesnt kill innocent ppl I'd like it a lot
Nothing kept me hooked, was really boring, I feel like this should be more of a comic than an actual story. However its takes guts to post you work so keep it up
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This book keeps getting better and better I can’t stop reading it so please keep writing this book and please write the next chapters soon so I’ll be able to read it thank you ** 😂this book is so 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂
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It's a funny go novel, with some similar stuff to nanomancer but with a funny and good twist.I recommend it 😊 ------------------
Shameless Author here, just wanted to know what you people think. This is gonna be my first original Novel as my other one is somewhat of a fan-fic. Trying out a new concept and don’t worry my other novel will still be continuing. So for those that thought I may have dropped it well think again.