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Reborn as Naruto the dragon of the multiverse
Author: sky_johnathan
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Three reincarnations become one
Journey as the mc travels to Make the omniverse a better place
Mc Bardock reincarnation
mc harry Potters reincarnation
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Okay I'm gonna drop this for a few reasons. This clearly hasn't been edited, you didn't even go over it. Grammar and the fight scene is sub par, I mean for fucks sakes, you couldn't even read it over atleast once to fix the very obvious spelling mistakes. The story doesn't make sense, first off he should be having multiple personality disorder. I doubt that the mind if a weak otaku can compare to the cruel and battle hardened mind of Bardock, or the strength of mind Harry has through all the years if abuse and manipulation. His personality just doesn't fit. Next the actual plot is BS so far, as we saw in the previous chapter( chapter 2) you clearly haven't thought it over and thus confused us. You even went to the comment section and replied and said '... does that make more sense?' Hence you obviously didn't put much thought over the plot. I mean seriously I can get behind the personality crap and very AU **** but stuff is just too confusing, why the **** is zelretch helping him, death in naruto isn't a woman, AU I know but what. And didn't he die at the Dursleys? So maybe he never even went to Hogwarts and participated in the war besides I don't recall harry ever having all three deathly Hallows on at the same time which is the standard MoD setting, for all three to be collected and **** activated making death his ***** kinda. Bardock is a proud and violent saiyan so he would've killed the village. Harry is meek and humble but had temper issues due to the horcruxes right? So dunno what he would've done. Dunno what the original life personality was like but I can assure you I don't believe anyone can handle the abuse naruto got. Next why the hell do they know what happened in DBZ I get it if zelretch let them view it with kaleidoscope but what the ****. Over all these are the main issues, should you fix the plot holes I may come back to read. And do note I am not flaming you these are actual points that need to be addressed.