/ Fantasy / Reincarnated As A Bee
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Work! Work!! Work!!! This was the major objective of Luke's life as his daily timetable was work in the morning, afternoon and evening. Night was the only chance he had to sleep and rest. Due to his stressful lifestyle, Luke died from overdose of stress relievers while sleeping. Somehow he was given another chance as a bee, the god must had known that he was a workaholic. This time Luke planned on the adventuring the world however, this was against the code but he found his way out of the hive and into the outside world.
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The premise of the story is really great with the man character turning into a bee after dying. There seems to be no problem with the grammar as well. However, the story is really fast-paced. There was no explanation of the emotions he felt after he found his life changed. If these points are fixed, then it could be a really promising novel.
The start of the novel is not bad but the rest is a different story. Try to take it slower instead of jumping from him realizing he is a bee to him being a bee for weeks already. Describe how he feels, the difficulties and advantages of being in the body of a bee. Show us how he interacts with the other bees, do they accept him? Reject him? Another thing I didn't like are the video game-like stats and abilities. Those are out of place in a story happening in reality. I will be honest, the concept of your story is not that amazing as well. There are ways to make this work, but this is not it. With all that said, keep writing and improving. I am sure you will get better in the next chapters or your next novel.