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A young man obsessed with technology gets returned to life as a dwarf in a fantasy world. Now stuck in a world that's culturally similar to the dark ages, he will have to fight against tradition, cultural suppression, and even the gods themselves, to regain access to his beloved gadgetry.
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I don't feel like writing a long review but i see a lack of reviews and do not want to see the author not motivated to continue. Do read the story as i do recomend to give it a try. My review wil probably seem rather negative but it is simply because i am writing things i feel that the author could improve upon. The story itself is good, chapters are long. writing: Very little to point out. Some very minor mistakes here and there which mostly just fast writing mistakes. (random example not in the story: continioys.) I do not remember which words but the author probably pressed the wrong letter on accident and did not find out. I have only seen one or two of them. updates; I dont know, wish more but is somewhat consistent probably? Story: It is moving along, wish to see more on how blacksmithing is done. I also personally hope that there wont be any guns and cannons at some point but i wil find out. Character; they seem alive but yet somehow feel simple. The characters lack a certain depth to them. Battle fanatic only thinks of battle. Researcher only thinks of researching. They are somewhat predictable and simplistic in their thoughts. World; The world is big and all and places are rather well described. The only thing i find lacking is that places arent described enough. What does the town lay-out look like? How does the square and surrounding buildings look like? Only some places are well described in more details but i feel like a lot is just glossed over. Stil i read everything so far (offline and had not used the acc) and i wil continue to read either as soon as a chapter drops or when there are more chapters.
I was surprised at how enjoyable it was to read. Though I wish there was more time spent on the life Kvallin and Bekhi had with the Elves.
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this is some peak dwarven fastasy that iv read. I absolutely loved it. I dont even drink never have now i want dwarven alcohol and to work at the forge!
If you are looking for a fantasy story with a dwarf MC, and this feel like a proper dwarf story at that. I'm 20 capter in at this moment and i quite love this story so far, and hope it will continue for a long time [img=update] (Writing Quality)= im dyslectic so i cant realy judge the quality of the text but i feel good. (Stability)= 1capter a day "at this moment" witch is great, but im worryd for "writers block" witch comes from over-writing, but keeper going, i need MORE. (Story)= not to fast not to slow i feel like the story is going at a nice pace. (character)= i like the MC kind but not to kind, i find what the MC is trying to do and make to be very intresting and intriging (World)= the world feels wast. most because the hint/mix of difrent info given in the capters. i get a lot of warhammer, middle earth and divers fantasy feels from the story, probably a lot of inspiration from it. PS: this is just my take on the story so far, as i said im only 20 capters in and, i might be a little biased because of my love for fantasy dwarfs :P. and i have ben looking for a good dwarf novel for a long time.
Dwarf mc and world? sold We need more novels like this