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a normal guy who reincarnated in dxd with some wishes
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Write a reviewIt is a good read you just have to stop your brain at some points to get the idea behind some things the characters are not how people should be portrayed it’s more of an AI or a robot and they are all over to place one moment they are enemies and the next he is asking them out on dates with like 2-3 paragraphs. The power levels are all over the place like Thor is in the top 5 of the world and in this Odin tell that the mc can kill him when he is not even 9 or how mc can get powers from any anime and they are super powerful to the point they have to much already like he has (limitless,sunshine,shadow power from the shadow monarch,power of destruction,gravity and such) and he is all over the place in the ranks so in the end you don’t even know where his power stands and some people are not like they are betrayed in story’s or legends like Aries wants to kill mc because ‘he is a threat’ but the Aries I know about whould want to fight mc idk it is a good read but can be better
Reveal Spoilerincredible fanfic the character after training and becoming strong starts to loosen up more and takes away our regrets that remained in the anime
Reveal SpoilerWriting quality 2 stars its better then a translation but not by much. Update stability is 5 star it updates a lot. Story development is 3 stars its about a overpowered character with a harem its alright. Character design is 2 stars its alright most overpowered characters don't have a good character design. World background is 5 stars
The grammar is decent, which is the downside of most fanfics on this app. What I did notice in this story was the lack of character interactions, and when they did interact it came out forced, it even made me cringe sometimes. The concept is good, the story is pretty fast pace as of chapter 16(where I left off). Hopefully it is improved, I’ll probably come back again after trying out other fanfics on my list. Overall not a bad read if you have aren’t prone to second hand embarrassment like me from all the edgy and cringy moments.
Author what you constantly indicate who is speaking seems a little superfluous without it it would be much better. The work itself is pretty good. I'm looking forward to continuing.
Tidak... Jangan ada adegan lemon diantara kita... [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Aku baru membaca beberapa bab, dan yah, kurangnya adalah interaksi dan percakapan antar karakter agak hambar, tapi aku akan terus membaca, kuharap ada perubahan.
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Gran trabajo hasta el momento 👌 espero continúes y completes ésta obra 👍 sigue así!😁👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
A strong main character, a good harem, something a little unexpected can happen in the story, which makes the story better, and I think the emotions and dialogues between the characters are weak. It would be much better if they paid attention to these, but it is a good thing for beginners. And it gets better as the episodes progress, I wish you success.
Hum. It's not bad, It's a little choppy with a chunni mc, but I find it a pretty decent read I suppose. I would recommend trying to emulate the style of his youth training arc in terms of pacing and fleshing out his progress.
Easily Understandable seems like the author releases 1-2 chapters per day overall I love it ............................................................................................
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Author emir_adar
I will try to not drop it until I finish the story, so give me a review and motivate me. and I don't want to make this story a harem but if readers want a harem, who am I for denying it?