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My brother writes good books, well I would even say the best books. So here is the review you deserve. Anyway, y'all better read that book or else you'll have a problem with me. Also, y'all have never seen this review elsewhere and if yes, then your mind might be playing some tricks on you
It's still a bit too early to tell from just these chapters, but I liked this novel. The author weaved the MC's backstory in a way that you would easily relate to him. I also liked the vivid description of the inner emotions of the characters; it hooks you up. Overall. It's a novel with great potential, and I can't wait for more.
Terrific novel full of intrigue and wonder! I highly recommend you pick this up and don't put it down! The vivid details and lifelike characters will have you losing track of time and asking for more before you know it!!
[This review adheres to the five different rating categories Webnovel provides. In order, Writing quality, stability of updates, story development, character design, and world background. I will separate these into different paragraphs for your convenience.] The writing quality is five stars, easily. Not even one spelling error in the available chapters thus far. On top of that, the dialogue feels real. The main character feels real. The paragraph flow is seamless! The stability of updates is five stars. With an initial five chapters to start everyone off, I'm sure we can expect more at a steady pace going forward. The story development is five stars. The pacing is wonderful and makes it easy for you to really immerse yourself in this world. The character design is four stars. While I can visualize our main protagonist as an average college student, I can't picture specifics. His hair color? Eye color? His skin? Mystery. Overall not that bad though. World background is five stars. Most of it is in the synopsis as of now, but I have no doubt that it will come through beautifully as the story progresses. A really impressive story and I can say for sure that it'll be staying in my library!
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Truthfully I hope more people catch this book and fast, Edol is such a fun character and the creator is quite creative. The five pages went too fast for me making me want more! This is a fun one if you need something new I definitely would suggest this 100%
I've read the first 5 chapters. They go down like fresh water and will leave you begging for more. The mc is kind of a meme and I have high hopes for future hijinks.
Love the detail and descriptiveness. This is a sure hit. The author invokes humor that has the reader laughing out loud. The reader isn’t able to predict the story as they read which is awesome, there are a ton of surprises and twists and turns. Good work. Can’t wait to read more.
Ladies and Gentleman, a new novel from the author san is here xD. Without a doubt it will be a banger, after learning all the ups and downs of writting this is the master piece author has made. Because I know author personally.
Good job author, you improved chapafter another, great story with amazing writing style, i loved the mc and your descriptions. The plot was well written and your knowledge made great touch to the chapters keep up the good work
I HIGHLY RECOMMEND THIS NOVEL TO YOU ALL. I just read one chapter and it's good . Better than mine .. This novel is fresh with a new concept if the author didn't mess up than it can also come in top 25. No kidding. Everyone should read it. Keep going author. You can do it. I believe in you.
My brother writes good books, well I would even say the best books. So here is the review you deserve. Anyway, y'all better read that book or else you'll have a problem with me. Also, y'all have never seen this review elsewhere and if yes, then your mind might be playing some tricks on you
My brother writes good books, well I would even say the best books. So here is the review you deserve. Anyway, y'all better read that book or else you'll have a problem with me. Also, y'all have never seen this review elsewhere and if yes, then your mind might be playing some tricks on you
G'day folks! I'm planning on writing a chapter each day now, so stay tuned for updates! Tired of protags using swords or fists? Edol's here to test out the viability of whip + dagger. f you like fantasy novels with deep world backgrounds, give this a try. Cya.