Actually @caivincent , I thought more about it and decided you are right, I wrote and moved back a chapter that handles the transition.
Shameless routine self review. Who will like this novel: People who played games such as x-com, people that enjoy strategy, action, sci-fi and a little bit of horror/thriller. People who won't like this novel: Harem fans, gooners. But seriously, I'm trying to write a decent defend earth against impossible odds, and I hope you'll enjoy it.
just a small time skip, you'll get a summary of what has happened behind the scenes in 3 chapters time.
Nothing special or praise worthy. Read the first 7 chapters, and there is basically no premise, overly wordy when nothing is happening and we don’t even get an image of the world. What we know: the mc has gone from a world to another that is exactly the same plus maybe the existence of supernatural, how and when did this happen? We don’t know, it’s just stated. How does he look? Where does he live, what kind of life, anything about him? We don’t know. Anything about the “game”, the world or any characters? Nope, nothing happens or it happens outside the camera. I would give 1 to everything, but the translator still did a decent job so i don’t feel like giving him a bad score.
This is pure , unadulterated nonsense, whoever wrote this should feel sad. I gave up at chapter 4. It feels as if a chinese author wrote a chinese mc, then decided that the mc is from the west, even though everything is still chinese. Plot makes little to no sense, the style is garbage and I’m constantly wondering what is going on.
Agreed. Either you do what you can to reintegrate a person, or you root out the problem definetly, half measures just lead to more problems.
As for non-violent crime, it would entirely depend on the crime that had been committed. For example, if one were to be convicted of theft, they would lose the hand they used to steal the item. Others included imprisonment for a limited duration, assuming they survived the backbreaking work given to prisoners. They would either fear going back to such a hell or become a repeat offender, thus adding to their three strikes.
Tyranny of Steel
History · Zentmeister
Hi mon ami, good news, i’m coming back home tomorrow, allow me a little bit of rest and i’ll start posting agai.
3 done, one last to go on the 12
It would have actually been quite a twist, and it’s not like I can’t use it…
Beneath the great shadow of the Orokin Mountain Range, the group of explorers stood poised to venture into the unknown. Their objective lay in the uncharted lands beyond the colossal peaks, a promise of discovery and potential prosperity. The mountain's gnarled heights stood like jagged teeth against the sky, their snow-capped peaks glimmering in the early morning sun as if smiling a cold, foreboding welcome.
Reborn With The Magical Academy System
Fantasy · Mitico
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Strategy games were always Arthur Corioli's refuge. Behind his screens, the socially awkward streamer is a tactical genius. In real life? He barely leaves his apartment. Then his computer crashes, and everything changes. A single program remains: "Zero Latency." The interface feels familiar—missions, resource management, a global map. The objective is clear, stop an Alien threat from conquering earth. But is it just a game? Follow Arthur as he struggles with the heavy responsibility of leading his forces against an ever evolving enemy, deal with grief and impostor syndrome. Inspired by games such as X-COM, Phoenix Point, and Plenty of novels.18 Chs 30 Collections
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Reborn With The Magical Academy System
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The Fire, Father of Legends has turned into embers. The era of gods has been forgotten, and soon the era of heroes will follow. The new era of men is tormented by the savagery and superstition of the unworthy heirs to humanity. As magic, once a source of wonder, becomes a weapon of war, Roderick, a veteran war mage seeks to change the course of fate. Forsaking conflict, he endeavors to create an academy dedicated to the peaceful study and exploration of magic. But tragedy strikes as the war mage dies before his dream can be realized. In a twist of fate, a god takes pity and reincarnates a man of science from another world to take his place, however, the house isn't empty and there is danger within the walls.45 Chs 1.3k Collections
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Chillin' in a Dungeon
Dungeons & Miscellaneous, a giant company building dungeons for gods, kingdoms and rich privates. After years of honorable service at D&M Stephen decided he was tired of making dungeons for others, so he embezzled enough materials to build his own and ran away when police came knocking on his door. Follow this unlikely Mc as he builds a dungeon to live comfortably. Warning: may contain humor and nonsense10 Chs 69 Collections
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Summoner's Gamble
Mana does not grow on trees. In the world of Sefora, invisible wars are fought over this ever-fleeting resource. The fate of countless depends on every drop obtained. A young summoner, full of ambition but lacking experience, discovers in his master's diary an alternative source of mana. By forming a master-servant contract with a demon he will be able to draw on the unlimited reserves of Hell. However, the day he finally completes the ritual to call on a sovereign of hell, a dying naked hobo appears. "What's going on?" ----------------- Small warning for light dark humor, nonsense and some gore.4 Chs 6 Collections
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Sinner's fall
Robert Sandford was born unable to control his impulses and thus lived a life taking pills to suppress his desires. But when he decides to stop living as a drugged-out member of society, he suddenly dies and is sent to hell to receive his punishment. No one will come to help him, he is all alone, and his only chance of escaping the darkness is through random summonings that will break his will even further. Can he achieve freedom through his madness? ---------------- I have a side story In the writing prompt competition: https://www.webnovel.com/book/hunt-for-a-demon_23032814506950205 Little WARNING: the story contains a copious amount of violence, puns, and mental disease. You are warned.15 Chs 16 Collections
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The Unwanted Fate Child
Chosen by fate to do its bidding, a newborn child will find itself shunned by his kind and left to die in a forest. How will fate thread his path forward?3 Chs 6 Collections
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Destroy All Aliens
The last chance for humanity's war against the Chiron's Disciplines, a coalition of alien races formed to put a stop on human emergence on the galactic chessboard, disappeared in the midst of their mission and without it, humanity succumbed. However, two centuries later one of the ships reappears and with it, the hope of resistance rekindles in the heart of humanity.1 Chs 3 Collections
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A Demon's Word
I Ended up being tricked into servitude by a demon. Pay is bad, there are not many benefits but hey, at least I get to travel. More accurate synopsis: Guy fucks up and end up having to fuck up other people or he will get more fuck up. Seriously, this novel is quite dark at times, there will be lot of dark humour coming soon. If it ain't your deal walk away.1 Chs 6 Collections
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The Magic Accademia
The Augusta Accademia for magically gifted welcome the new batch of freshmen, for those who have the talent to join, not even the sky is the limit. Come learn how to bend fire, control dragons and raise the dead just to make them play at your Halloween party.3 Chs 14 Collections
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Brave New Old World
After climate change wiped human civilisation clean off the surface of the planet, the survivors woke up to a changing world where they no longer stand on top of the food chain. The lead is one of the few people that had the luxury to sleep through the apocalypse in an underground facility, woken up by intruders he will bear heavy responsibilities and face hard challenges in the new Earth.2 Chs 8 Collections
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What impressed Arthur most was the apparent AI driving the NPCs. They responded to his commands with what seemed like genuine emotion—fear, determination, occasionally even humor.
Zero Latency
Sci-fi · Mitico