Rewrite asdf

Honestly a great read love the story development so far, can’t wait for more. Keep up the good work.

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OldFellow

Interesting idea though not well developed, by ch 4 a month or so has passed and we dont see 1 proper conversation or scene, it feels like i am reading a story on fast forward where every scene is told and not shown, by this point we also don’t know anything about the mc aside from his name, does he have family? Friends? What did he do? It feels weird reading it. Author, good luck moving foward with the story

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SiiiFuuu

I'm gonna be honest... I thought I'll drop this since I've been failing to find something interesting to read before I knew I was at chapter 3. I like crazy mc that pushes his body to the limit and makes use of his cheat. looking forward to the rest of this novel.

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Chesirebobo

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LV 3

Raphis

"When I first started reading, the initial impression I had of the world was similar to SAO. However, after a few chapters, everything had its own story. Yet, truly, the world in this novel is very chaotic and disordered; fortunately, you manage to explain some aspects in great detail, although some are still lacking in detail. Overall, it's already good."

LV 3

ShieldGodZ

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