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Screw every single one of you bit*hing about the info dumps cuz without them there would be plotholes galore. This is a great fanfic. .......
I LOVE THE STORY LUV U DUDE. ummm can u give me the invite link for ur discord the old one dont work haha lol anyway thx for the story luv you author
This is plain trash, mc wishes make no sense, his perks are not perks, but wishes, he gets a system as a freebie without anyone mentioning it, his wishes makes him have abilities he shouldn't have, he can steal abilities even tho he is already op, the story does't have a direction, this fic is without logic whatsoever about a one dimensional character who is in fact a retard who thinks he is a genius.
Ty for the chapter I think I have to re read it all Ty for the chapter I think I have to re read it all Ty for the chapter I think I have to re read it all
I like the history but the frequency it's a big problem. You, author, write some chapters and suddenly stop, and repeat. I don't like somethings in this fanfic, personality of protagonist it's one of them, somethings who he say and did it's just ' BLEW' for me.
For my taste the story progresses way too slow and instead of reading a story it feels like reading the info dump. .........................
Great... :-) ..............fillerfillerfillerfillerfillerfillerfillerfillerfillerfillerfillerfillerfillerfillerfillerfillerfillerfiller
like the story so far but missed some of the authors books where fun started where people gone mad started a riot it was fun times reading their banter about copying that copying this so yeah 5 star for you athor from me...idk😂🤣👌
Well ... I'm sorry to say that I'm disappointed, but not with the story but with the criticisms that the hell with which they are chapters of pure text and explanation? I finished the chapters in less than 2 hours and I'm still waiting for the next ones
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Good story hdjdjdhdhdhdhdhdhdjdjshhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhhdhsydyrryydydydydydydhdhdhdhdhdhdydydhhddhdhdhdhdhdgdydyddyddydydydyddydyddydyydydyddydydydydyddsdddydydydydysysydyysysysysysysyysysysydydysysyydysysysysysysysysysysysydydydyydydydydyds
La historia esta buena aun van pocos capítulos para decir mucho pero bueno, aunque me gustaría que se puediras agregar parte de romance pero dado la mentalidad del MC lo veo difícil pero espero lo agreguen,espero mas caps👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻
A bit to op but if you're planning to eventually make him an 11 dimensional being who would then ofcourse have to fight such beings makes sense
Exp exp is a good looking guy who is a good guy and a guy who is a very good guy whowho he is a good guy and he is a good guy and he is a weeeeeeeeeeee man and he is
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more info dump than story.....................................................................................................................................................
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In my sleep deprived state I read this as 'MCU: Grinding to Impotence. So as an apology here is five stars ☆☆☆☆☆. Filling up character count
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I like the idea but it's totally opposite of the title and 70% of the story is info dumps. 😒😒😒😒😒👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎😵😵😵😵😵😑😑😑😑😑😑😑
giving 5.0 yeah yeah new chapter yeah. . ...................a... a.. MA.... a. .a... a.. ....... .. ....... . ........... ........... a.. .....
info dumps just a lot of info dumps also cringe%%%%%‰%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%*%%*%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%*%***%*%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%
Extremely promising fic with tons of potential. ................................................................ ................................................................
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Bueno me encanto y todo se debe a como planteaste al MC. Y leyendo tu historia me dio la idea que un kriptoniano estaría demasiado roto en una serie de cultivacion ya que cuando uno cultiva lo que hace es refinar su cuerpo y energía para ir en contra del cielo(o mejor dicho las leyes que definen los mundos) y pues podría refinar 2 tipos de energías muy diferentes sin ninguna problema ya que automáticamente absorbe el sol que si no me falla la suposición es que en todos los wuxias y xianxias en todos lados esta esa energía.
The best wish granting fanfic I've ever read, the wishes were well thought out, so far so good except one small inconsistency in the story. Too early for a good review. Like most fics here I don't expect it to go over 40-50 chaps, might not touch there even.
Disregard Thid review it’s just for the experience points! So whY did a lot of people give this stiry 2 or 3 stars for the info dumb. Do you think you know exactly what the author wants the story to be? Dude has to explain his line of thought and how he sees the story coming along. Also if he didn’t gube so much info then yall would have been like “That’s a plot hole” and bow it’s “So much info dumb”. This is such a ‘Damed if you do, Damed if you don’t’!
Screw every single one of you bit*hing about the info dumps cuz without them there would be plotholes galore. This is a great fanfic. .......
I LOVE THE STORY LUV U DUDE. ummm can u give me the invite link for ur discord the old one dont work haha lol anyway thx for the story luv you author
This is plain trash, mc wishes make no sense, his perks are not perks, but wishes, he gets a system as a freebie without anyone mentioning it, his wishes makes him have abilities he shouldn't have, he can steal abilities even tho he is already op, the story does't have a direction, this fic is without logic whatsoever about a one dimensional character who is in fact a retard who thinks he is a genius.
Ty for the chapter I think I have to re read it all Ty for the chapter I think I have to re read it all Ty for the chapter I think I have to re read it all
I like the history but the frequency it's a big problem. You, author, write some chapters and suddenly stop, and repeat. I don't like somethings in this fanfic, personality of protagonist it's one of them, somethings who he say and did it's just ' BLEW' for me.
For my taste the story progresses way too slow and instead of reading a story it feels like reading the info dump. .........................
Great... :-) ..............fillerfillerfillerfillerfillerfillerfillerfillerfillerfillerfillerfillerfillerfillerfillerfillerfillerfiller
like the story so far but missed some of the authors books where fun started where people gone mad started a riot it was fun times reading their banter about copying that copying this so yeah 5 star for you athor from me...idk😂🤣👌
Well ... I'm sorry to say that I'm disappointed, but not with the story but with the criticisms that the hell with which they are chapters of pure text and explanation? I finished the chapters in less than 2 hours and I'm still waiting for the next ones
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Good story hdjdjdhdhdhdhdhdhdjdjshhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhhdhsydyrryydydydydydydhdhdhdhdhdhdydydhhddhdhdhdhdhdgdydyddyddydydydyddydyddydyydydyddydydydydyddsdddydydydydysysydyysysysysysysyysysysydydysysyydysysysysysysysysysysysydydydyydydydydyds
La historia esta buena aun van pocos capítulos para decir mucho pero bueno, aunque me gustaría que se puediras agregar parte de romance pero dado la mentalidad del MC lo veo difícil pero espero lo agreguen,espero mas caps👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻
A bit to op but if you're planning to eventually make him an 11 dimensional being who would then ofcourse have to fight such beings makes sense
Exp exp is a good looking guy who is a good guy and a guy who is a very good guy whowho he is a good guy and he is a good guy and he is a weeeeeeeeeeee man and he is
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more info dump than story.....................................................................................................................................................
MORE..............PLEASE MORE..............PLEASE MORE..............PLEASE MORE..............PLEASE MORE..............PLEASE MORE..............PLEASE MORE..............PLEASE MORE..............PLEASE MORE..............PLEASE MORE..............PLEASE MORE..............PLEASE MORE..............PLEASE MORE..............PLEASE MORE..............PLEASE MORE..............PLEASE MORE..............PLEASE MORE..............PLEASE MORE..............PLEASE MORE..............PLEASE MORE..............PLEASE MORE..............PLEASE MORE..............PLEASE MORE..............PLEASE MORE..............PLEASE
In my sleep deprived state I read this as 'MCU: Grinding to Impotence. So as an apology here is five stars ☆☆☆☆☆. Filling up character count
Five star review to boost the rating!!!!!! Five star review to boost the rating!!!!!! Five star review to boost the rating!!!!!! Five star review to boost the rating!!!!!! Five star review to boost the rating!!!!!! Five star review to boost the rating!!!!!! Five star review to boost the rating!!!!!! Five star review to boost the rating!!!!!! Five star review to boost the rating!!!!!! Five star review to boost the rating!!!!!!
I like the idea but it's totally opposite of the title and 70% of the story is info dumps. 😒😒😒😒😒👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎😵😵😵😵😵😑😑😑😑😑😑😑
giving 5.0 yeah yeah new chapter yeah. . ...................a... a.. MA.... a. .a... a.. ....... .. ....... . ........... ........... a.. .....
info dumps just a lot of info dumps also cringe%%%%%‰%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%*%%*%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%*%***%*%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%
Extremely promising fic with tons of potential. ................................................................ ................................................................
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Bueno me encanto y todo se debe a como planteaste al MC. Y leyendo tu historia me dio la idea que un kriptoniano estaría demasiado roto en una serie de cultivacion ya que cuando uno cultiva lo que hace es refinar su cuerpo y energía para ir en contra del cielo(o mejor dicho las leyes que definen los mundos) y pues podría refinar 2 tipos de energías muy diferentes sin ninguna problema ya que automáticamente absorbe el sol que si no me falla la suposición es que en todos los wuxias y xianxias en todos lados esta esa energía.
The best wish granting fanfic I've ever read, the wishes were well thought out, so far so good except one small inconsistency in the story. Too early for a good review. Like most fics here I don't expect it to go over 40-50 chaps, might not touch there even.
Disregard Thid review it’s just for the experience points! So whY did a lot of people give this stiry 2 or 3 stars for the info dumb. Do you think you know exactly what the author wants the story to be? Dude has to explain his line of thought and how he sees the story coming along. Also if he didn’t gube so much info then yall would have been like “That’s a plot hole” and bow it’s “So much info dumb”. This is such a ‘Damed if you do, Damed if you don’t’!